Open Poetry #24 |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
You just here today going to be mine forever now You and I are here Close to your heart Fell In love with you Won't you love me? Tonight Let the stars so bright To shine my love away Let us be the same let the ocean whispers slowly to the dawn let you complete my heart My heart for you Let you be mine forever Don't let the ray of light spend more time with us let the dawn come Come and complete my heart complete my love for you complete With your love for me comeplete Come and complete my heart complete fillied your love In my heart let me slowly whisper your name In your heart let the love stay till the dawn [This message has been edited by vandana (01-06-2003 11:26 AM).] |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
Vandana, I do hope the dawn will last long for you. |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Vandana, maybe your love will be completd soon. I hope so.... "Love makes the world go around" |
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gemjop Member Elite
since 2002-11-18
Posts 2587Pencilveinia, USA |
Vandana, this made me smile. it was full of hope. "Let us be the same let the ocean whispers slowly to the dawn let you complete my heart" i like this, its what we all want, look for, to be matched in feelings with someone, and when you have it, its so special. well written vandana. i like your thoughts. lots of love, gemma xxxxx learning each day, for you and i, our paths have met, i've already learnt that you are love. |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
It nice to feel complete...James |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(big hugggsssssssss) I only hope your love story comes true and you find all the happiness you deserve, sweet friend, hopefully I will find this completeness sometime soon, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Vandana, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
What a love story that rises with the sun. Well done! Kethry Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind. Unknown |
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