Open Poetry #24 |
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Hello, it's me. |
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gemjop Member Elite
since 2002-11-18
Posts 2587Pencilveinia, USA ![]() |
Broken in sleep Its you. Tipsy on zzz's i answer And you laugh. Not even sweet slumber could stop me from listening. Your voice on the end of the line. Is priceless, timeless, a dream. learning each day, for you and i, our paths have met, i've already learnt that you are love. |
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Midnitesun![]()
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
Pleasant phone call? ![]() ![]() |
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garysgirl![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Gemma, my feelings exactly when I hear my Love's voice on the other end of the line. He likes to hear me when I'm just waking up... Your Love probably does, too. Most of the time, though, we have our daily conversations at night, right before bed. Thanks for sharing.... ![]() "Love makes the world go around" ~~with love and hugs from Ethel~~ [This message has been edited by garysgirl (01-06-2003 10:59 AM).] |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
that's very sweet. I have one of those silent phones..that barely rings *s |
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NewEnglandlazurlu Member Rara Avis
since 2002-01-04
Posts 7470A Mountain Paradise |
gemma, what a sexy, romantic write. I enjoyed the dreaminess of this. Hugs, Marti |
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Salty Senior Member
since 2002-11-23
Posts 669Texas |
I'm agreeing with Marti on this one. Very much enjoyed the read ~Salty In the Midst of movement and chaos, keep stillness inside of you. |
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scorpio Member Ascendant
since 2002-10-02
Posts 5178right...there |
Simple and beautiful.. believe in what your heart feels... |
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Aenimal Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-18
Posts 7350the ass-end of space |
I liked this, brought back some nice memories of my high school sweetie, talking into the wee hours until we were both falling asleep and neither of us wanting to hang up...sigh |
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PoeTik JusTice Member
since 2003-01-05
Posts 186California, USA |
Very nice poem, simplicity can be so nice! I loved this! XoXo Love Alwayz XoXo |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
dreaming is nice, when they come true, its a hard call to keep the dream, or live the reality |
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