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Fall of Soft Song
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Fall of Soft Song |
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Greeneyes  
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind 
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Last winter I was distracted by raindrop shivers Where willows stood lonely in water-- golden color, shape of rivers revealing nature In a reflection of memory you lift me-- held me-- I was washed -- in gentle yearn Where dark seas meet canvas Painting the fall of soft song Deep inside the stillness |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
" you lift me-- held me-- I was washed -- in gentle yearn Where dark seas meet canvas Painting the fall of soft song" ------------------------------------------ Ooooh Lauren!! This is SO beautiful! Very lovely...wistful and so you! ~Hugs~ ~ Season's Greetings to my 'family' at Passions ~ |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (smiles) Yay!!! Oh my gosh, I have missed your gorgeous words so much, sweet friend, yay, you speak with such maple syrup grace here, may the warmth of the fall always sing in you and may the willows flower with bluebirds and butterflies! (kiss on cheek) I love this, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Lauren, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." Shakira [This message has been edited by Mistletoe Angel (12-17-2002 01:35 PM).] |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
Lauren my dear friend, reading your words again is like having an extra Christmas blessing. You have been missed dearly my  sister of heart!  |
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Larry C
since 2001-09-10
Posts 10286United States |
Lauren, That "soft song" touched my heart too. I much enjoyed, thanks. If tears could build a stairway and memories a lane, I'd walk right up to heaven and bring you home again. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Lauren You sing a lovely soft song, enjoyed. |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Greeneyes - words I write cannot express your beautiful writings. So I say, 'as always...' BC |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Your words fall so softly...... ~ May all your songs be as soft and beautiful as this poem Linda |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
This was beautiful...gave me shivers. ThisDiamond |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
enjoyed  |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
You write with such grace and simple elegance~ Hugs Lauren~ |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Lauren, you write the most beutiful poetry. I really enjoy reading it. Thank you..... "Love makes the world go around" |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
I've been distracted all my life...nice write! |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
nice..gentle flow...with a hint of sadness. I enjoyed |
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Christopher
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-02
Posts 8296Purgatorial Incarceration |
interesting. this is more impression than concrete, ache as opposed to descriptive. it makes you 'feel' what you're saying, instead of seeing it. i like it! |
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CocoBaci Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 3043 |
Splendid writing GreenEyes... Smiles2uPoetFriend *~coco~* |
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Moonlight Romeo
since 2001-09-10
Posts 982The heart of you |
A soft song indeed, from one who knows the words. Thank you. What light through yon window breaks? It is the east, and Juliet is the sun. |
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