Open Poetry #24 |
Like Magic |
nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
I walked that line of want and need, today awakened with a frown then you appeared as if you knew and turned my world upright from down And talked as if time never flew and distance seemed more near than far my smiles returned, as I felt yours a western warmth of words that are Customized to fill the gap as always when my ups are downed, you reappear like magic wished and send me forth in comfort gowned A friendship lasting, forever bound I walked that line and you, I found "Love is not blind - It sees more and not less, but because it sees more, it is willing to see less." |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
"Customized to fill the gap as always when my ups are downed, you reappear like magic wished and send me forth in comfort gowned A friendship lasting, forever bound I walked that line and you, I found" ========================================== Very very beautiful Maureen. I especially love these lines. ~Hugs & Smiles~ ~Time has cast a spell on you, |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Maureen - This is a pleasure to read. Friendship's like this are a treasure. Chris "Hope" is the thing with feathers- |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
enjoyed |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Maureen, this is lovely as usual. I love your play with words. Kethry Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind. Unknown |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
just like magic! *smilng* |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
Maureen~ Such a lovely write this is. I truly enjoyed the read. Beautifully done. Hugs, ~Vicky "...until you have read the verse on his heart, |
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gemjop Member Elite
since 2002-11-18
Posts 2587Pencilveinia, USA |
Isnt it wonderful how that someone always gets there in the nick of time, and no matter how desolate you've been feeling, once they're there, you couldn't feel more happy. and they feel the same too. this is beautiful, enjoyed very much. lots of love gemma xxxxx learning each day, for you and i, our paths have met, i've already learnt that you are love. |
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NewEnglandlazurlu Member Rara Avis
since 2002-01-04
Posts 7470A Mountain Paradise |
This brought a smile to my face. Anyone who has a friend like this, has treasures for a lifetime. Wonderful ... hugs, Marti |
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SmartChick Member Rara Avis
since 2001-09-23
Posts 7081On A Journey To The Unknown |
Awww Maureen, this is beautiful. |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
Thank you Nancy, sometimes it's "funny" how when you need a friend, they are there, even if you hadn't seen or talked with them in months or even years. |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
Thank you Chris and Vandana, it's always nice to be surprised *s Hi Keth, I like to play with the words...sometimes it works and other times it doesn't. Glad it worked for you today. hugssss M |
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