Open Poetry #24 |
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This Craft In Turquoise |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
The toll of time would cease it's chime beneath the sound of sunrise Turquoise seas upon their knees in swirling winds to capsize Craft these visions wet in fissions fire and tempest fury fainting To your heart as guardian art thou seeker bright into this painting This fairy call to stroke of all impressioned and outstanding In lift and brush the pale of hush upon the glide commanding To sail of these, born turquoise seas enchanted and uncharted For all of time your heart to mine of sacred stream unparted Copyright Kkh 1/4/03 [This message has been edited by ThisDiamond (01-05-2003 12:16 PM).] |
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garysgirl![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Kathleen, I love the way you write. You are a master at rhyming, and it's absolutely beautiful...... ![]() "Love makes the world go around" |
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Wind![]()
since 2002-10-12
Posts 2981 |
Oh wow! That was so amaizing! I could imagine beautifull turquose wasters swirling around my feet. You are so talented! Never be normal! [This message has been edited by Wind (01-05-2003 03:29 PM).] |
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sweetwater Member
since 2002-12-16
Posts 178Perth |
I have to agree with the other posters.. this poem is beautiful and clever rhymes.. loved it. |
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NewEnglandlazurlu Member Rara Avis
since 2002-01-04
Posts 7470A Mountain Paradise |
Kathleen, this brought to mind our winter vacations in the Caribbean. Lounging on pure white sands and swimming and boating in crystal clear turquoise seas. Thank you for taking me away from the cold and knee high snow. ![]() Hugs, Marti |
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Magnus![]() ![]()
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Kathy, you always write with impeccable inner rhyme and cadence....A superb palette of words from a master's pen... Enjoyed the painting.. |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
ThisDiamond - your words are like the soft breeze that caresses the forest, the sea, and thoughts of the reader... BC |
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Mistletoe Angel![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
![]() (big hugggsssssssss) This is precious, sweet friend, I love it, I wish for your journey to always be a calm one among gentle reflection, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Kathleen, thank you for sharing! ![]() May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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regards2you Member Elite
since 2002-10-01
Posts 3940California |
Perfectly painted. So beautiful. Warm regards, Pat ..without surrender, be on good terms with all persons.. |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
beautiful description of the openness of the seas |
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