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Aenimal
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-11-18

Posts 7350
the ass-end of space

0 posted 2003-01-05 02:07 AM

There was a cold grey
cloud that reigned over our lives
we called it father

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

1 posted 2003-01-05 02:09 AM

wow...short but powerful...had one of those clouds too

JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

2 posted 2003-01-05 03:41 AM

Nice writing...James

Rainbowdust
Member

since 2002-12-05

Posts 320
Sydney, Australia

3 posted 2003-01-05 06:09 AM

I really liked this one too, especially the play on reign/rain. Am in admiration of your talent once again.

The soul would have no rainbows, had the eyes no tears.

Kethry
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-07-29

Posts 9082
Victoria Australia

4 posted 2003-01-05 06:33 AM

sounds like a reign of fear.
Kethry

Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind. Unknown

Sandpiper
Senior Member

since 2002-06-15

Posts 738
land of flora and fauna

5 posted 2003-01-05 06:46 AM

I hope that storm has passed!

"And it was at that age...Poetry arrived in search of me...And something started in my soul."
Pablo Neruda

NewEnglandlazurlu
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-01-04

Posts 7470
A Mountain Paradise

6 posted 2003-01-05 01:00 PM

Oh my! I congratulate you ... this is brilliant. You have no idea how much I wish I had written this.

Are we related?

Hugs, Marti

inkedgoddess
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-11-19

Posts 7392
Ohio

7 posted 2003-01-05 01:08 PM

i was lucky, i had the rainbow of Mama rose after the clouds broke, im sorry if you didnt
have some salvation like that to counterbalance. really,

gemjop
Member Elite

since 2002-11-18

Posts 2587
Pencilveinia, USA

8 posted 2003-01-05 01:15 PM

Hello Raph. Another reality in life you have drawn in words. I can so relate.

love, gemma xxxxxx

learning each day, for you and i, our paths have met, i've already learnt that you are love.

garysgirl

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since 2002-09-29

Posts 19237
Florida, USA

9 posted 2003-01-05 01:18 PM

Raph, this is a very good write, with much emotion in it....
It felt kind of sad to me............

"Love makes the world go around"
~~with love and hugs from Ethel~~

Aenimal
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-11-18

Posts 7350
the ass-end of space

10 posted 2003-01-05 01:21 PM

Hope the cloud passed Dixie.

Thank you very much James.

Rainbowdust then you now understand how I feel about your writing

Began as terror Kethry but it dissapated into being misery

Sanpiper mostly, thanks for reading

Marti thanks for the kind words, as for a relationship I hope not for your sake, wouldn't want others linked to this tainted bloodline

Inked in between the scattered showers there were some salvation breaks

Aenimal
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-11-18

Posts 7350
the ass-end of space

11 posted 2003-01-05 01:23 PM

Oops you guys slipped in while I was writing,

Thanks gemma I'm sorry you can relate though, I'd rather people not have to feel these things you seem too nice

Very sad Ethel but this is a release of that sadness, better than bottling it up, thanks as always

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