Open Poetry #24 |
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Memories |
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jeffwillett Member
since 2003-01-04
Posts 86Texas, US |
-Memories- The cool breeze. The summer air. It reminds me of when, You were there. The warm grass. The cold wood. We sat all night, I said all I could. The long nights. The late walks. It makes me think, Of those endless talks. So many things, Remind me of you, How everyday, Seemed brand new. |
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visitvenus Member
since 2002-12-30
Posts 101PA, USA |
Wonderfully expressed. I can relate. -Venus |
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regards2you Member Elite
since 2002-10-01
Posts 3940California |
Jeff, Memories....you captured what many of us have in our minds. I like this. Warm regards, Pat ..without surrender, be on good terms with all persons.. |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
Welcome Jeff.... Seems there is always something there to remind us, but I try not to look back, the past lies where it's meant to be. |
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MattGarcia Junior Member
since 2003-01-04
Posts 19Texas, USA |
nice one man, so much for having trouble making it flow |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
Jeff~ I really enjoyed the flow and the feel of this. Very nicely penned. Welcome to Passions. ~Vicky "...until you have read the verse on his heart, |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
mmmm, what memories! |
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kaile![]() ![]()
since 2000-02-06
Posts 5146singapore |
enjoyed reading this |
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