Open Poetry #24 |
Signs |
Corinne Member Ascendant
since 1999-10-28
Posts 5167state of confusion |
Signs They marched across the causeway, along the span above the wetlands, stirring snow geese into flight. From Davis to Sacramento they trekked in straggling lines, carrying yellow and black signs of peace, reminding me of another time when I was too young and horrified to understand. In this interval of constant threat, while colors flew in renewed allegiance, I wondered where these voices were - kept silent by the stronger tongues of fury perhaps, or yanked backstage by a giant hook. Wish I had summoned the strength and found time to walk the bridge with a sign of my own. © 2003 Core [This message has been edited by Corinne (01-04-2003 03:17 PM).] |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
Peace. Too many silent voices already. |
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Corinne Member Ascendant
since 1999-10-28
Posts 5167state of confusion |
Thanks, Midnightsun. Cor |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(big hugggsssssss) Oh Corinne, I know just how you feel, it saddens me to see us more restricted than ever and I just wish there existed such a sign that you can go as the crow flies or go underneath or above it all! (sigh) This is heartfelt, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Corinne, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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Aenimal Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-18
Posts 7350the ass-end of space |
Wonderful write, i think sometimes we are too little to make a difference or that no one ever listens, so we sit and wait for the voice of the voiceless and then perhaps we'll be moved to move.. |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Very much truth...I enjoyed reading... "Love makes the world go around" |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
yes! I love this! carry on! |
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Sandpiper Senior Member
since 2002-06-15
Posts 738land of flora and fauna |
I remember that time, I was old enough to understand...and it is again, just as frightening---enjoyed! "And it was at that age...Poetry arrived in search of me...And something started in my soul." |
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Nan
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
Indeed - "All they are saying - Is give Peace a chance...".. |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Corinne - too many today are trained to not speak out... BC |
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Corinne Member Ascendant
since 1999-10-28
Posts 5167state of confusion |
Thanks everyone - for your kind replies. I was a bit shy about posting this one - Cor |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
why shy about posting it? one sees and feels there is a sense of conviction in it...that speaks to the fact complacency is not always a lack of belief, but perhaps a lack of knowing how to act on it... as always.... very well done.. |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Excellent write! Yes!! Peace... Nancy ~Time has cast a spell on you, |
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