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Balladeer And The Good Old Days
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Balladeer And The Good Old Days |
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Toerag Member Ascendant
since 1999-07-29
Posts 5622Ala bam a |
Balladeer remembers The days of long ago, When he had a love life Before he grew so old. He can still recall his "first time" He was all alone It was in his bedroom No one else was home. Yes he dreams of yesteryear How his love life used to be, A roll of paper towels And a Playboy magazine. So now you understand, His love life's not so sweet, The only love he gets, Is when I kiss my sweet wife's cheek. [This message has been edited by Toerag (12-17-2002 11:19 AM).] |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
To go from all that to the nothing of now... why no wonder he's always in a foul temper and picking on your sweet self! LOL ROFL... poor thing... I guess we should be kinder to him? LOL This is great, sweets! |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Toe, I think he still reads playboy, enjoyed. |
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garysgirl 
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Poor Ball-deer........  So that's why Mr. Balladeer tells you what to kiss all the time? Maybe we should be a little nicer to him.....  (I really think ya'll are so cute, my friend)  "Love makes the world go around" ~~with love and hugs from Ethel~~ [This message has been edited by garysgirl (12-17-2002 10:51 AM).] |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
ROTFL. YOU will get your just desserts for this one. He will no doubt burn you britches for telling on him. |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
This poem was so full of visuals! LOL ~ Sending my love, hugs, and kisses to Balladeer--I think he needs them more than you would! tehe EA |
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Music Maker Member
since 2002-07-07
Posts 152THE ORIGINAL !!!! |
Oh my dear Lord!!!!! Now you have fired the shot back in to his court!!!! But as I read this, you are quite happy to kiss his ass!!! And I thought you were above that! Wonderful write, had Sunny and I absolutely curled up in fits of laughter......Thank you, and to Balladeer (who - I believe, hasn't seen this one yet)....Touche. Just can't wait for your riposte - in this cut and thrust. Have you two realised just how much mirth you generate around the world with your talents? Kind thoughts, Music Maker & Sunnyone, John & Sunny Someone who thinks logically provides a nice contrast to the real world. |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(big huggssssssss) Oh Toerag, this is so sad, let's all give Balladeer a group hug of warmth as he is so deserving of this love! (giggles) This is touching, sweet friend, I love it, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Toerag, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
uh... hmmmmm....well... |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
ROTFL. I think you are both incredibly cheeky. |
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Toerag Member Ascendant
since 1999-07-29
Posts 5622Ala bam a |
MUSIC MAN....I don't return favors....just a flaw in my personality I guess? |
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Aenimal Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-18
Posts 7350the ass-end of space |
An excellent re-BUTT-al. lol |
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Balladeer
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
If you think I don't have a sex life, Toe, then your wife is better at keeping a secret than I thought!!  (stop giving away all my secrets, cretin!!) |
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Skyfire
since 2000-12-27
Posts 3381Riding |
*pauses* Oh my... "it was cute, it was like he was shy and didn't want to make it too obvious" |
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Laney Member
since 2002-12-18
Posts 85Illinois |
hahaha.....I really don't know what to say! Gave me a good laugh though! Two thumbs up!!  --Alana |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
ROFLMBO @ you both! You two always make me smile.  "...until you have read the verse on his heart, |
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Salty Senior Member
since 2002-11-23
Posts 669Texas |
I'm Ducking.....Some poopie is going to start flying now.  ~Salty covering her head. |
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christian Member
since 2002-12-18
Posts 331 |
haha. |
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Toerag Member Ascendant
since 1999-07-29
Posts 5622Ala bam a |
christian...I'm utterly ecstatic you liked my poem, and knowing what a very "honest" person you are, I know this came from your heart. [This message has been edited by Toerag (12-19-2002 05:19 PM).] |
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Corinne Member Ascendant
since 1999-10-28
Posts 5167state of confusion |
Ewwwwwww, Toe! Yucky! Cor |
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