Catch and Release (Senryu)

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Aenimal
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-11-18

Posts 7350
the ass-end of space

0 posted 2003-01-03 02:19 PM

I catch errant thoughts
Only to release them on
fields of baby blue

jellybeans
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since 2000-10-13

Posts 2298

1 posted 2003-01-03 02:53 PM

*big smile* love this, the title and presentation!!

garysgirl

Member Laureate

since 2002-09-29

Posts 19237
Florida, USA

2 posted 2003-01-03 03:09 PM

Raph, I love this. I really like to read these little Japanese verses and write them, too. But, I don't think I've even attempted to since there was so much attention brought to mine a few weeks ago.........

Keep writing them. You do an EXCELLENT job..an A+ in fact!!!!

"Love makes the world go around"
~~with love and hugs from Ethel~~

Nightshade

Member Patricius

since 2001-08-31

Posts 13962
just out of reach

3 posted 2003-01-03 03:21 PM

Very nicely done!! Chris

"Hope" is the thing with feathers-
that perches in the soul....

-Emily Dickinson

Aenimal
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-11-18

Posts 7350
the ass-end of space

4 posted 2003-01-03 04:02 PM

Thanks jellybeans I'm glad you did

Thanks Ethel, I'm sorry to say I missed the hubbub, haven't been reading as much as i'd like to. What did you do?

Thanks Chris very kind words

inkedgoddess
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-11-19

Posts 7392
Ohio

5 posted 2003-01-03 07:28 PM

words fill up this blue,
close the day, they disappear
what remains of you?

thoughts of dark despair,
better, still than soil your page,
now cast to the wind

ok, im going.........

[This message has been edited by inkedgoddess (01-03-2003 07:29 PM).]

Midnitesun

Member Empyrean

since 2001-05-18

Posts 28647
Gaia

6 posted 2003-01-03 07:32 PM

I love this one. BTW, have you ever read the book written by some Alaskan ladies called Catch and Release?
It is a hilarious look at the proverbial
'available' single Alaskan man. I'll get you a copy if you want a good laugh, though it's really written for the man-seekers.

regards2you
Member Elite

since 2002-10-01

Posts 3940
California

7 posted 2003-01-03 08:17 PM

Very well done. Enjoyed.
Warm regards, Pat

..without surrender, be on good terms with all persons..
"Desiderata"

scorpio
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since 2002-10-02

Posts 5178
right...there

8 posted 2003-01-03 08:20 PM

Cool image...nicely written..

believe in what your heart feels...

Wind

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since 2002-10-12

Posts 2981

9 posted 2003-01-03 08:26 PM

That was unexpected. I sertanly hhave never heard anything like it before. It was great, just great

Never be normal!

Aenimal
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-11-18

Posts 7350
the ass-end of space

10 posted 2003-01-04 03:22 AM

thanks inked looks like you're in a writing mood afterall..good

Kacy can't say that i've read it and thanks for the offer but I'm not exactly a man-seeker lol

Thanks Pat appreciate the warm words

Thanks scorpio glad you liked it

Wind thanks nice of you to say, hope you're feeling better

Rainbowdust
Member

since 2002-12-05

Posts 320
Sydney, Australia

11 posted 2003-01-05 04:37 AM

Ah, and what a pleasure to catch some thoughts released by you.

Wonderful write!

The soul would have no rainbows, had the eyes no tears.

Aenimal
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-11-18

Posts 7350
the ass-end of space

12 posted 2003-01-05 02:02 PM

Rainbow I blush at your comments

and am grateful for everyone

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