Open Poetry #24 |
Skyscraper |
Professor Gloom Member Elite
since 2000-07-23
Posts 3082of Depression |
What beauty is in steel, Blended with concrete and glass, A tall pinnacle, With a thin ring of green grass, Circled with asphalt Shifting winds are deftly caught, Man’s splendor rushed quickly passed. Gloom |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
And so men build mountains in mimickry of gods. Where once was nothing but a thought now there is concrete facade in replica of miracles. (you inspired.) smile... and yes, I AM a fan of design and architecture, so don't even ASK me where the above came from. Nice to read you PG. Hope you have been well, m'friend. |
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Professor Gloom Member Elite
since 2000-07-23
Posts 3082of Depression |
Thank you, Serenity, For the nice poetic response, I am a great fan of city architecture, Seeing it all the time, and am please you could enjoy this. As for health, I exist the same, Winter is my season with the dark and cold Matching my soul so well, but with age, arthritis. Gloom |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
I always wanted to build buildings or design landscapes...this write is wonderful! |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(sigh) While my heart belongs to nature, I do admire some architectural wonders made of organic compounds, like I love the Stonehedge and the Colliseum! (big hugggsssss) This is wonderful, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Aszard, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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Professor Gloom Member Elite
since 2000-07-23
Posts 3082of Depression |
Thank you, passing shadows, My humble words do credit to only a few buildings Some are more spectacular than words can express, Pleased you enjoyed. Thank you, Mistletoe Angel, Always a pleasure to please you with my words Your words are always so kind. Gloom |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
it is amazing to see the way man has taken nature as inspiraation and built things totally outside the realm. Form and space with an essence of time blended into an artform we take for granted each day as we pass.. enjoyed this Gloom.. |
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