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Open Poetry #24

Inside breath

bsquirrel

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-01-03

Posts 7855

0 posted 2003-01-03 12:00 PM

Feed me to the lungs of your host,
so I can be the blood and the air.

Temptress

Moderator

Member Rara Avis

since 1999-06-15

Posts 7136
Mobile, AL

1 posted 2003-01-03 01:48 AM

*sigh* I love the stuff you say...
and this just CAN'T be falling so fast..

~~I Love You~~

Tiersdin
Member Elite

since 2000-11-17

Posts 2364
east coast

2 posted 2003-01-03 04:56 AM

I don't know what else to say but, Powerful!

Sunkissed.

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

3 posted 2003-01-03 04:59 AM

hmmmmm.....good stuff

bsquirrel

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-01-03

Posts 7855

4 posted 2003-01-03 11:43 AM

Thank you! It's great to see all your faces.

inkedgoddess
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-11-19

Posts 7392
Ohio

5 posted 2003-01-04 08:22 AM

wow,
im breathless!!

garysgirl

Member Laureate

since 2002-09-29

Posts 19237
Florida, USA

6 posted 2003-01-04 08:51 AM

Mike, I'm glad to see you back on Open. I enjoyed your poem... Thanks...

"Love makes the world go around"
~~with love and hugs from Ethel~~

serenity blaze
Member Empyrean

since 2000-02-02

Posts 27738

7 posted 2003-01-04 11:27 AM

Inhaling.

oh yes.

regards2you
Member Elite

since 2002-10-01

Posts 3940
California

8 posted 2003-01-04 11:43 AM

Shockingly ~great!~ Enjoyed.

Warm regards, Pat

..without surrender, be on good terms with all persons..
"Desiderata"

bsquirrel

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-01-03

Posts 7855

9 posted 2003-01-09 06:26 PM

Thank you.

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