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poets more profound...than I
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poets more profound...than I |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738
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In words I draw the map of cause elevations swing with mood Absurd? I pause in slip of claw sliding down the wall monsoon emoting desperation blind to think that life is so unkind while wrapped in pretty paper? NO-- I wish for glitter in the foil dancing underneath false lights... take the can and spray the pine and let me sleep in my belief that the sun will shine again and not to my relief. "Let it be", was better said, by poets more profound than I-- Let the dead bury their dead-- Yanno? I had to try. |
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Larry C
since 2001-09-10
Posts 10286United States |
"To be...or not to be?" Nope, I'll take your writing first! Love ya'.  If tears could build a stairway and memories a lane, I'd walk right up to heaven and bring you home again. |
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Aenimal Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-18
Posts 7350the ass-end of space |
There are few more profound or as honest as you on these pages. Love every word |
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garysgirl 
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Yes, Karen, I also love every word you write, even if I don't know how to reply to it. You are a very talented lady, friend.....  "Love makes the world go around" |
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Masked Intruder
Moderator
Senior Member
since 1999-05-23
Posts 1231Near golden sunsets |
all there is to do is try and try again til mind is crushed, heart's been broke and soul taken by sin. |
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Masked Intruder
Moderator
Senior Member
since 1999-05-23
Posts 1231Near golden sunsets |
okay, you're right. that was a bit dark and drear. i think i'm getting myself depressed. i'll come back and respond a bit more lightfully when i'm a bit less deprest. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
you got a way that no one will ever have |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
You are definitely profound sweetheart that's one of the traits that make you so endearing to many. Have a safe and happy up and coming twelve months. Eric |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
Ya know, everyone has a style of their own that is unique in their own way. Let me just say, I LOVE your style! Well done Serenity! |
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Paul Wilson
since 2002-07-07
Posts 4711United States |
Serenity~ To write of life and all it's ups and downs, truths and realities as you do touches on greatness when the reader connects with you and feels what you are saying to them.Your words scream out loud for release in this piece.Enjoyed...Paul "To share my poems with you is to share my heart with you" [This message has been edited by Paul Wilson (01-03-2003 06:22 AM).] |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
u dont need to try, you already do, |
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Toerag Member Ascendant
since 1999-07-29
Posts 5622Ala bam a |
Let's just lay out a couple more lines and rethink this...ya think? |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
~smiling~ I certainly know this feeling and you Do express it well. hugsss M |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
Need a spanking? LOL, talk about profundity (not profanity) You always drop something wonderful and unique into our laps. |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
the day you stop trying...I'll be crying  profound? when you rhyme...your feet dont touch the ground.  Will the wind remember the names it has blown in the past? |
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Martie
Moderator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
serenity--Your heart sprays color with glitter imbued, like pieces of wisdom with the soul of your muse....so ya just gotta believe the profound poet is you. |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Serenity...when all the superlatives have been used... then may I just add....well done! Thank you for this. ~Hugs & a Happy New Year~ ~Time has cast a spell on you, |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
wow...waking up over here and look at all the groovies you good people leave for me! Popping in to thank you all for the replies (and the get well wishes in the e mail are so sweet)oooh...love me, love me!  and yep, poets more profound than I--all of YOU--your talent and graciousness never cease to amaze me. Hugs to all of you with my gratitude to each of you for tolerating my madness.  |
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Auguste
since 2000-02-16
Posts 3953By the sea |
Gotta tell ya, this is one cool poem!  The stars will shine when I am gone, |
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bsquirrel
since 2000-01-03
Posts 7855 |
The ghost of Christmas past, I hope... |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Now why am I not responding to this before now? In all truth, I've read it before, but I appreciate the bump by the poet before me for giving me a chance to find a quiet moment to thank you... and for NOT letting some things be... |
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Salty Senior Member
since 2002-11-23
Posts 669Texas |
fighting highs and lows are fight within thenselves. I love the way you have of expressing life like no other ~Salty |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
enjoyed |
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