Open Poetry #24 |
I lost a friend today (For Tyler) |
RebelFolk Junior Member
since 2002-12-27
Posts 15Nashville, TN |
I lost a friend today Though I never said goodbye He made no effort to share his pain And we never saw him cry A shameful, selfish way to end his innocence is lost They found him on the mountain side Under the bitter morning frost So much grief he's left behind It ended with a gun I hope his pain is over now For ours has just begun Music is the language God used to create the Universe |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
Not a good ending for him, nor a good beginning this year for you, the family and friends. Whatever caused him to do this, he is now beyond feeling any more pain. My condolences to you and all those he left behind. |
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NewEnglandlazurlu Member Rara Avis
since 2002-01-04
Posts 7470A Mountain Paradise |
Darn, this is gut-wrenching. I am so sorry to read about your friend. I hope he has find some peace and those left behind can one day understand what happened. Hugs, Marti A poem is never finished, only abandoned. |
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Jeffrey Carter
since 2000-04-08
Posts 2367State of constant confusion! |
Tragic, Hang in there |
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Alwye
Moderator
Member Elite
since 1999-06-16
Posts 3850In the space between moments |
what a horrible experience....I just lost a friend a week ago in a car crash...I feel your pain, I truly do. Raw, emotional poetry and very well written. *Krista Knutson* |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Oh goodness, this is heartbreaking. I'm so sorry for your loss. My prayers are with you, his family and other friends..... "Love makes the world go around" |
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aries_luv_ppl Senior Member
since 2001-09-20
Posts 1448Universal Mind |
While you're missing him, he is right there in your heart Take care...nice devotion poem to your friend. Besh wishes to you this year. Eliza Simmons |
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DawnG
since 2000-06-23
Posts 1494United States |
Rebel, My condolences on the loss of your friend. I lost a friend about a month ago due to natural causes, but if you need someone to talk to, please e mail me. Dawn |
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Salty Senior Member
since 2002-11-23
Posts 669Texas |
I am so sorry. ~Salty In the Midst of movement and chaos, keep stillness inside of you. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
I know it well. Peace be with you. It does get easier. |
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