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Open Poetry #24

The Artist Within

SPIRIT
Senior Member

since 2002-12-29

Posts 1745
California Desert

0 posted 2003-01-02 01:40 PM

THE ARTIST WITHIN

Please,
Oh please - don’t move.
Wonderful! Thank you,
I want to paint you.
The outline of your form
Fills the canvas of my mind.

You are
The warm glows of pink,
Surrounding me with love.
You are the passionate red,
Arousing my sexual desires
To new and giddying heights,
Of awareness.
You are white,
The white of a purity
And unselfishness,
That is never-ending.

My eyes have never beheld
Such beauty.
Forgive me,
I don’t mean to insult
By calling a man,
Such as yourself,
Beautiful.
But you are beautiful,
From the innermost depth
Of your being.
Your auras’ display such
Kaleidoscopic wonders,
Of immense pleasure and joy,
Causing the artist within me
To create - works of art.
Art that remains
Indelible, in my heart,
On my soul.

Gentle breezes,
Wafting through my consciousness.
A pleasant awakening,
Reminding me of the contentment's
Of my life.

©spirit

regards2you
Member Elite

since 2002-10-01

Posts 3940
California

1 posted 2003-01-02 02:29 PM

This is very, very good. Enjoyed a great deal. There is one such as this, though not in my personal life.....
these kinds of people do exist...

Thanks for the wonderful painting.

Warm regards, Pat

..without surrender, be on good terms with all persons..
"Desiderata"

Salty
Senior Member

since 2002-11-23

Posts 669
Texas

2 posted 2003-01-02 02:57 PM

Wonderful imagery...and colors. I really enjoyed the realness of the conversation.

Very well painted!

~Salty

In the Midst of movement and chaos, keep stillness inside of you.
--Deepak Chop

SPIRIT
Senior Member

since 2002-12-29

Posts 1745
California Desert

3 posted 2003-01-02 03:00 PM

Thank you for the kind words. Appreciated.

Gentle breezes,
Wafting through my consciousness.
A pleasant awakening,
Reminding me of the contentment's
Of my life. ©spirit

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

4 posted 2003-01-02 03:00 PM

whoa! I like this, very well done!

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