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Open Poetry #24

Sage Of Emotions

1slick_lady
Member Ascendant

since 2000-12-22

Posts 6088
standing on a shadow's lace

0 posted 2003-01-02 01:08 PM

Sage Of Emotions

you flavor
my passion
gently coloring
bubbling broth
stirring deep
these feelings
aromatically clinging
in air
your presence
lingers everywhere
recipe for
happy soup

“life is not about breathing moments, it is about moments that leave you breathless.” author unknown

[This message has been edited by 1slick_lady (01-02-2003 03:52 PM).]

SPIRIT
Senior Member

since 2002-12-29

Posts 1745
California Desert

1 posted 2003-01-02 01:57 PM

I love the way you express yourself. This is lovely. I like very much.

Gentle breezes,
Wafting through my consciousness.
A pleasant awakening,
Reminding me of the contentment's
Of my life. ©spirit

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

2 posted 2003-01-02 03:02 PM

happy soup...that's cute...

garysgirl

Member Laureate

since 2002-09-29

Posts 19237
Florida, USA

3 posted 2003-01-02 03:06 PM

Helen, you are stirring up a mixture here today... HaHa!!!

"Love makes the world go around"
~~with love and hugs from Ethel~~

Salty
Senior Member

since 2002-11-23

Posts 669
Texas

4 posted 2003-01-02 04:05 PM

I want to buy some of that stuff....maybe you sould patten it *S*
Absolutely delicious

~Salty

In the Midst of movement and chaos, keep stillness inside of you.
--Deepak Chop

winston
Member

since 2002-12-19

Posts 204
NW of Eden

5 posted 2003-01-02 04:37 PM

Great read. "Sage of emotion" a wonderful pun there.

"am a tourist not a terrorist, don't shoot, cause we are all on a journey to God" Michak

Cpat Hair

Member Patricius

since 2001-06-05

Posts 11793

6 posted 2003-01-03 11:40 AM

another showing of how a few words can say a lot... the metaphor and imagery very well done.

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