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green_itchy_stuff Senior Member
since 2003-06-26
Posts 1929New Caney, Tx |
Wet drips of suicide splatter my surroundings They all drift away Gone from me I live for you Just a matter of entertainment Its a struggle to live Something I'd love to do Why is it so difficult Even just to breathe I have chained myself to a cigarette And set my lungs on fire with injustice Or maybe an escaped form of foolishness A fool with blurry vision Build on myself and work a little bit Simple minded task laced with blockade Life constant challenge sold to defeat The price of living paid loving feast I want to do whats right See the light of Christ Feel his warm loving grace Be untangled from my sins Encouraged to keep going The greedy selfish hand of darkness He never misses and always arrogant His hatred hurts my lungs Turn my other cheek to his hateful blows Rise up something new They'll never stop But they loose to my faith No turning back, this time, no walking away -Kutless |
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True North Junior Member
since 2004-05-03
Posts 23 |
Its a struggle to live Something I'd love to do Why is it so difficult Even just to breathe these are beautifully expressed words... " all over the poem, not just this stanza  "now i read a piece of your freeline... i'm sure i will love to read a piece of a rhymed verse for you ! P.S. thanx for your reply... i got that article from www.harunyahya.com i invite you to view its contents. |
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Copperbell Senior Member
since 2003-11-08
Posts 956 |
I hear you...its tough hey. But the tide turns. There's a scripture somewhere that says the God of peace will soon crush satan under your feet. I felt pretty stuck for awhile but God has unravelled the things that held me so tightly - I can breathe deeply and easily now. I enjoyed your poem - and its more than just heartfelt (in reference to your note encouraging critique) |
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River Senior Member
since 2003-09-16
Posts 627my own little world |
hey, as usual, well done, I really like this, and couldn't have said it better myself. *hugs* - Bonnie Sue Running out of pain |
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pyre Member
since 2008-05-16
Posts 136 |
thank you |
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