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Star T
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since 2002-07-12
Posts 182
Philadelphia, US

0 posted 2004-04-29 06:27 PM


Lying here in pain,
Wishin i dint have to fake this smiles.
And wondering what it'd be like,
Not to camouflage this sadness with laughter.

My dream still real,
But the vision of it is now blurred,
The pieces of my shattering dream,
Am i bendin down to pick.

Not long ago all seemed well,
And the future reeked of brightness,
But all of a sudden,
I'm burdened with this unsureness.

But i must not fret or doubt,
I need to hold on to promises so true,
And words that never will fail to comfort me,
In this my time of worrying.

I still have hopes for this collapsing dream,
For i know that HE who holds my tomorrow,
Is not a man who can fail,
But a God who must excel;
If not for me, for HIS name's sake.

Jesus died that you might live...accept that and u shall be saved.

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Member Patricius
since 2001-03-09
Posts 12098
Idaho, USA
1 posted 2004-04-29 07:17 PM


Star T;  I enjoyed reading this and you are looking in the right direction for guidance!
He can do anything!

Betty Lou Hebert

Christioned
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since 2004-01-15
Posts 93
Huddling in the dark
2 posted 2004-05-04 05:41 PM


Star-T. This is an amazing thing. I've been searching for things that express the confusion that I've been feeling. This my friend, is just the right way to do so. Awesome write. much love, Christioned

"We don't stop playing because we grow old; we grow old because we stop playing"

WhtDove
Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-22
Posts 9245
Illinois
3 posted 2004-05-04 07:57 PM


Your faith always shines through in the end. That's the most important thing to hold onto.  That doubt creeps in and makes us stop and re-evaluate things and we're just not sure if we're moving in the right direction.  

Tredge forward, for if it's God's will, it will happen in His own timing, if not, if He closes the door, He always opens another one.

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Life may have influenced who we R, but we're responsible for what we become.
I don't question YOUR existance- GOD

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