Spiritual Journeys #2 |
Introspection |
Joyce Johnson
since 2001-03-10
Posts 9912Washington State |
Introspection I wake for start of new day to find all Nature stirring. The bumble bee and humming bird around the feeder whirring. The russet breasted robin has caught the early worm. He'll feed it to his lady love before the final squirm. Across the way the flower field fills up with willing workers. Spring in my valley scurries on; it is no place for shirkers. Not long ago, I too, was part of just such frantic action. I watch with cup of coffee and a sigh of satisfaction. I've served my time, no need to rise to a nerve wracking alarm. Without me Spring will carry on. I've rented out the farm. The days when I met life head-on is a part of history. In my newly welcomed leisure, I let life come to me. God has granted me this free time to measure my performance against the plan he had for me when I still had the chance to make this world some better in the little space around me. His patience with this willful child, does not fail to astound me. Dear Lord, I write this humble poem as my small praise to you and token of repentance for those tasks I failed to do. By: Joyce 4/22/04 |
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Trillium
since 2001-03-09
Posts 12098Idaho, USA |
Dear Joyce: I'm sure anything you failed to do was minor! Very nicely written and enjoyable to read! Love Betty Lou Betty Lou Hebert |
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Musicmaker1969
since 2000-06-25
Posts 589Peterborough, Ontario Canada |
Joyce. Lovely. It sounds like something I would write to Jesus. Looks like we have thes same heart for Him. Keep on writing. Jesus lives in my heart! |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
you must definitely have received the gift to view the world in all its splendor |
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Local Parasite
since 2001-11-05
Posts 2527Transylconia, Winnipeg |
A lot of people complain about the problem of "determinism," that there is a plan for everything and a way which things will undoubtedly occur. You've shown me the other side of this issue, the reassurance you feel that things will occur in the right order and that you need to nothing more than simply allow them to enter your vision. It's something truly beautiful and wise, and I'm glad you chose to share it with us. I had forgotten how lovely your writing is, Joyce---the meter reminds me of a poem by Robert Browning that I can't quite peg. Especially the feminine rhymes early on, really made it work perfectly for me. It flowed with order and precision that correlated to your subject matter. I'm pleased to have had the opportunity to read from you again--- Take care Brian |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Very peaceful. Love, Margherita |
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Joyce Johnson
since 2001-03-10
Posts 9912Washington State |
thanks to all of you for your lovely comments. Love, Joyce |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
Joyce, thank you for sharing your praise which I join. The poem was lovely. ....jo |
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Isobel Senior Member
since 2004-01-17
Posts 529Qld, Australia |
I really liked this poem Joyce. Love Isobel ox |
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