Spiritual Journeys #2 |
daddy's little girl |
LADY_DEATH Member
since 2002-11-29
Posts 105Fl |
Childhood memories from a little girls eyes rememberingher dad floating high in the sky Daddy's little Moonbeam Every morning I'd hear That'snot gray inmy beard but thehouse I painted last night ...dear As i grew older The love never died We became close friends Now you havewings How high you can fly! Above the clouds And thetides Don't worry about me I can carry my own I have my father's strength Bronzed in Gold A silent promise to love youmy father Till we meet again Goodbye my Father! Goodbye my Friend! |
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Larry C
since 2001-09-10
Posts 10286United States |
Wow. What a wonderful father and an even better tribute. So very well done. Peace and courage to you. And welcome to Passions...a good place to explore your feelings. An excellent start. And as I like to say: If tears could build a stairway and memories a lane, I'd walk right up to heaven and bring you home again. [This message has been edited by Larry C (11-29-2002 10:40 PM).] |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(big hugggssssssss) God Bless You, sweet friend, your father will always love you so very much and know now he will always be forever safe with Him, and when the time is right you will reunite with him, as now he expects you to live life to the fullest with his love always cheering you on and guiding you! (sigh) You are a true angel of words, sweet friend, God Bless You, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet friend, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Hello ... welcome to the circle of loving friendships found in the family of poets here~ 'I have my father's strength Bronzed in Gold' I am very sorry for the loss of your father ... it is a difficult loss and hopefully writing about him will give you some peace~ Rest assured that the 'strength' he *gifted* to you is what will see you through~ *Huglets* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Joyce Johnson
since 2001-03-10
Posts 9912Washington State |
A lovely tribute to your earthly father. I know how hard it is to give them up. Welcome to our corner. Joyce |
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LadySofia Member
since 2000-05-16
Posts 238FL., USA |
Hello dear! A very lovely poem that I am happy to finally have the time to comment online about. When I first read this personally, it really did bring a tear to my eye. I have not experienced the loss of a parent, but I know it is hard. You are strong, dear friend, stronger than many I know well. May your courage help others to triumph over their own adversities. Welcome to the Passionate Forums...you will find that you have belonged here all along. Amanda aka LadySofia ^_^ |
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Trillium
since 2001-03-09
Posts 12098Idaho, USA |
LADY_DEATH: This is such a touching poem and I can remember how I felt when I lost my father. I'm sure yours would be proud of you and the poetry you are writing. Hope to see more of you and welcome to Passions! Betty Lou Hebert |
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WhtDove Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-22
Posts 9245Illinois |
Welcome! May his memories carry you through the hard times. Keep writing, keep posting, and welcome to the family. <*\\\>< |
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earthman Junior Member
since 2002-12-04
Posts 21 |
As a father of three little girls I will forever strive for a relationship as close as this. |
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Lighthousebob Member Elite
since 2000-06-14
Posts 4725California |
W E L C O M E ! Yep.... and you will always be. I have a daughter that's 22 and one that is 13 and both are still Daddy's little girls. I actually did not have a lot of sorrow after reading your poem, but I found the humor that your Father expressed and the friendship that you have with your Father to be very appealing.... and the fact that you still gain strength from your Father is so reassuring. My Mother died when I was two years old and I still gain strenth from my relationship that I have with her. She will always be with me as your Father will always be with you. Nice to know, like you have written, that there is someone looking out for us from up above and that we have an opportunity to be with them once again. Amen. Good job and again, Welcome. -Bob |
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Magicmystery Senior Member
since 2002-02-13
Posts 821Windsor, Ontario, Canada |
This poem made me smile... although with quite a few tears in my eyes.... You and I both know we will see our loved ones again.... and we see them everyday in ourselves.... They are here now.... with a hand on our shoulder when we need it most.... our strenghth, our memories endure. Love, Light and Peace to you my friend sherry and... Cherish the good memories of the past and look forward to the adventure called Tomorrow. But above all... be kind to yourself today. |
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ashley Junior Member
since 2002-10-31
Posts 10U.S. |
Your dad was very lucky and I am sorry about his death but with you to keep his memory alive he will never be forgotten and he will always be loved |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
Welcome to Passions. A very touching tribute you write for your father. I know this loss so very well, my heart is with you. |
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nina1522 Member
since 2009-02-14
Posts 189 |
great poem, loved it |
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Tom Zart Senior Member
since 2006-05-18
Posts 682 |
What a wonderful poem may you compose many more. Tom Zart |
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SPIRIT Senior Member
since 2002-12-29
Posts 1745California Desert |
What a lovely tribute to your father. It was done with a touch of humor and gave us a very gracious picture of your father. This piece you wrote in 2002 (?) I am glad that someone resurrected it and I got to read it. Dinah |
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