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A Cloud's Tale (a rhyme)
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A Cloud's Tale (a rhyme) |
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Essorant Member Elite
since 2002-08-10
Posts 4769Regina, Saskatchewan; Canada |
A Cloud's Tale Alongst one highway on one lift steaded by a conveying drift a cloud fair-fared her way with course smooth-scudding in its breath and force intending with all fluff and soul toward a handsome minded goal. She groomed herself upon the flight perfumed and rosed her cheeks of white then asked the sun his deem of view and on her he said "beauty true!" So was she pleased, it enchriched far her soul as bright as any star "and may its book stay opened wide as love flips all pages inside!" But day in age came tolling down and still her breast's quest lacked a crown Vain was her wish that boldly flew while patience stayed like a statue and pages by love swiftly turned inside a heart as swiftly burned. Her blood of life so gravely strains and breaks its frame and hurting rains; Her whitesome cheeks turned wroth and swarth as anger thro and thro did worth. She stormed up heaven's holy stairs full of thunder and vicious cares And asked the sun his deem of view and still he said "a beauty true" A rainbow streched adown her formed and her cheeks again brightly warmed following its path she hears hopes crow her quest will yet fly tommorow. And thus all brightness finds a dark and thus all darkness finds a spark and in betwixt fair beauty's trait of natures in every fate. [This message has been edited by Essorant (10-14-2002 09:28 PM).] |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (sigh) This is so very well said, sweet friend, there is a liht in every strand of darkness and vice-versa so therefore He will always listen and will amalgamate our tears with that of hope and loves strength! (big hugggssssss) God Bless You, sweet friend, the clouds light up in your words, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet friend, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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Lighthousebob Member Elite
since 2000-06-14
Posts 4725California |
I like the mythological ring to your rhyme as if written during ancient times when the Greek and Roman cultures gave the elements such life like character as you have done here... I suppose if we could go back in time and if we could give the elements voice, I suppose what you have written here just might be the case about the beautifully adorned and well natured cloud who stormed in and gained herself a rainbow.  Very good creative writing my friend.-Bob |
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Essorant Member Elite
since 2002-08-10
Posts 4769Regina, Saskatchewan; Canada |
Mistletoe Angel & Lighthousebob-- Thank you both so much for taking the time to read my piece and feeling its meaning. I'm glad to know you enjoyed. Take care, Essorant |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
Very deep meaning within these words Essorant. Well done poetic piece of art. |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
Wonderful write. Much enjoyed. All writing comes |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
I enjoyed this very much. Thanks for sharing. Love To All, Ethel |
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