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Spiritual Journeys #2

Autumn (Haiku)

[This message has been edited by Lighthousebob (11-19-2002 09:11 PM).]

Lighthousebob
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0 posted 2002-11-19 01:08 PM

Autumn

piptalk.com/pip/cards/photos/Land/Ld3202a.jpg

knotted black branches
shadowed by pure light flicker
leaves brown on golden.

-lighthouse bob

Skyfire

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Riding

1 posted 2002-11-19 03:03 PM

*smiles* this is beautiful

I am a Knight who says Ni!

aries_luv_ppl
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Universal Mind

2 posted 2002-11-19 09:18 PM

this put a smile in me. nice.

Eliza Simmons
~Sometimes when I look back at what I wrote, I don't recognize the 'Me' in the past anymore.

NewEnglandlazurlu
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A Mountain Paradise

3 posted 2002-11-19 10:32 PM

JUST FABULOUS!

Hugs, Marti

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Louisa May Alcott

Mistletoe Angel

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4 posted 2002-11-20 11:36 AM

fireflies on moths
brushfire fairytales born
auburn tea party

(smiles) Yay!!! Awwwwwww, this is sooooooo gorgeous, sweet friend, I love autumn so much and your beautiful words are always shining with the colors of blessings! (big huggsssssss) God Bless You,. sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Robert, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

Joyce Johnson

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5 posted 2002-11-20 10:32 PM

This is truly beautiful and so peaceful. Joyce

Trillium

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Idaho, USA

6 posted 2002-11-21 03:13 PM

Bob: Lovely autumn scene and thoughts!

Betty Lou Hebert

Mysteria

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7 posted 2002-11-22 12:39 PM

What a wonderful piece of work by the Creator and yourself. Truly beautiful haiku.

Let there be peace on earth,
and let it begin with me.

Songbird
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Missouri

8 posted 2002-11-23 01:12 AM

Very warm and relaxing mental image. Enjoyed this very much.

VAS
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9 posted 2002-11-24 12:52 PM

Beautiful, Lb!!!

Great haiku to go with terrific pic!

Whether on the shoal or on the shore,
I'll seek the lighthouse evermore.

SPIRIT
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California Desert

10 posted 2003-02-25 06:37 PM

I'm browsing in places I have yet to see. I like this enormously.

VAS
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11 posted 2003-02-26 10:53 AM

a fine haiku and lovely photo, too!

Whether on the shoal or on the shore,
I'll seek the lighthouse evermore.

mysticpoe
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since 2003-02-28

Posts 883

12 posted 2003-02-28 05:45 PM

Hi Bob, what did you do here. Three profound and graceful lines accompanied with a beautiful picture. Very nice job.

Wayne

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