Spiritual Journeys #2 |
Ashen Dove |
Xelorz Junior Member
since 2003-08-16
Posts 10Burlington, Ontario, Canada |
She let forth a cry a life breeding plea so confused so distraught unbestown of her fate unaware of her path to be left destitute by the everlasting leach drained of essence and left a barren fool to endure the unbroken dispute of infallible desolation trudging through time suppressed from significance a naive ashen dove abound with chasity to be exploited then left a cursed shard such a young feeble mind upon an unblemished body shall they grace more? may she know joy? only one can shield the burden and place her upon the rock only one who may redeem her and remove the unhallowed noose the divine liberator the everlasting savior my true lord Jesus Christ This is my first poem posted here. Hopefully it leaves a good impression. |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
Welcome to the site and I know you are really going to enjoy the friendships made here. This was an excellent first posting and I am sure we all will enjoy numerous poems of yours in the future. Check your email for a pleasant surprise, of just one of the things you can do here at Passions. Again, welcome. I don't want to know where I am going, it'll ruin my journey. |
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SharaRose Member Elite
since 2003-07-19
Posts 2501Somewhere out there~ |
He is the one that delivers! Thanks for sharing this one. Loved it! SharaRose @-->-- Of sound, and speech let all lift the hearer! |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
A wonderfully inspirational entrance post! Welcome to Passions..I'm sure you will love it here. I look forward to seeing more of your work. ~Smiles & Hugs, Nancy~ ~The breeze that kissed you on the face, |
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Trillium
since 2001-03-09
Posts 12098Idaho, USA |
Very moving poem! Welcome to the site and I hope it will become your favorite place on the Web! Betty Lou Hebert |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(big hugggssssssss) God Bless You, dearest friend, this is such a beautiful debut as He cares for all His sons and daughters and the dove shall fly again as broken wings will always mend in time! (sigh) I love it, may your heart always soar with harmony! Welcome to Passions, sweet friend, may you be inspired by all of us here as we will all be inspired by your lovely words! I can't wait to read more of your uplifting poetry, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton I don't need no proof when it comes to God and truth |
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