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mysticpoe Senior Member
since 2003-02-28
Posts 883 |
I wrote this poem in 1976 and since 1977 or so I didn't write any more, until recently. Tell me what you think? Thanks, mysticpoe. to enter the breezy dreams of a morning's dawn to span through life and yet not be born to spaciously ponder amongst the many lures to leave and become that once ignored to know he that came with noble chants to go and to leave and receive no thanks to be amongst that airy essence for only the dreams know of his presence. If nothing is something |
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LoveBug
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since 2000-01-08
Posts 4697 |
I really like the style of this.. the comparisons and just the way it flows. I like the imagery and I just think that you did a really nice job with this. The 70's eh? Nice  Oh, make me Thine forever |
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mysticpoe Senior Member
since 2003-02-28
Posts 883 |
LoveBug, thanks for your very nice comments and especially thank you for taking the time to read the poem. Just wondering if you think the style of this poem from long ago, is like what I write today. Also, I enjoyed your 70's comment. Thanks again. mysticpoe If nothing is something |
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MysticDreamer Member
since 2003-04-21
Posts 131 |
I like the feel of this one. It reminded me of Tibetan Monks. |
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mysticpoe Senior Member
since 2003-02-28
Posts 883 |
Mystic, nothing like making me feel like I should be there. But I like it. Thanks for stopping by. Enyoyed as always. mysticpoe |
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LoveBug
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since 2000-01-08
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Compared to your work now, the structures are smiliar, but now there is a bit more wisdom to your words. Just gets better with age Oh, make me Thine forever |
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mysticpoe Senior Member
since 2003-02-28
Posts 883 |
LoveBug, I left the comment for this poem at the other poem. Sorry, But again thank you for all of your support and time in helping me with this. mysticpoe |
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Annie Junior Member
since 2003-07-23
Posts 42Seattle, WA |
Yes . . . and this one too. |
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eor Senior Member
since 2002-09-26
Posts 959blues & greys |
wow poe, i just came across this, don't go into this forum much, but this is a very powerful write, i like the message this projects forth... "There never was a genius without a tincture of madness." |
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Mysteria 
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
Love Bug has it right on - your style has gotten much stronger to become your own, and your words are so much wiser. Like fine wine we are and only get better with age, and wiser. I don't want to know where I am heading, it will spoil my journey. |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
poe, actually this reminded me of a time when I strongly felt that presence and not only in a dream, so I thank you for the fond memory You are quite a versatile writer . . . xxoo [This message has been edited by littlewing (08-27-2003 03:26 AM).] |
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mysticpoe Senior Member
since 2003-02-28
Posts 883 |
Annie, eor, Mysteria and littlewing. Thank you all so very much. mysticpoe If nothing is something |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (big hugggssssssss) God Bless You, sweet friend, this brought a smile to my heart as I could truly feel the sanguined tranquility and wiseness of your soul! (smiles) This is gorgeous, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet friend, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton I don't need no proof when it comes to God and truth |
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