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altoladybj
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since 2003-06-24

Posts 79
Pennsylvania

0 posted 2003-06-24 12:40 PM

When God paints a lovely scene that captivates the eye, his palette is a rainbow, his brush the winds
soft sigh.

He gives to distant mountains a misty silver haze,
and bestows a sunlit dress on balmy summer days.

In the fields and in the woodlands his mastery is seen, in timid hues and brilliant strokes, a kaleidoscope of green.

Mountain lakes and rivers, seas and oceans too, the
heavens high above us a harmony of blue.

The blushing tones of sunset salute the dying day to reappear at sunrise when night has passed away.

The reds and browns of autumn, the oranges and the gold, a feast on heaven's platter, in awe our eyes behold.

At last with brush in hand his masterpiece we find,
agape love, grace and hope, his gift to all mankind.

Trillium

Member Patricius

since 2001-03-09

Posts 12098
Idaho, USA

1 posted 2003-06-24 02:08 PM

altoladybj: Your poem is beautiful and I enjoyed reading it. Lovely scenes painted with your words.

Betty Lou Hebert

Joyce Johnson

Member Rara Avis

since 2001-03-10

Posts 9912
Washington State

2 posted 2003-06-24 02:47 PM

Nice rhyming and meter. Joyce

altoladybj
Member

since 2003-06-24

Posts 79
Pennsylvania

3 posted 2003-06-24 03:03 PM

Trillium:

Thanks for the warm welcome and very kind remarks on my poem. I'm glad you enjoyed it.
Beverly

altoladybj
Member

since 2003-06-24

Posts 79
Pennsylvania

4 posted 2003-06-24 03:06 PM

Joyce:

Thank you for taking the time to comment on my poem. It means a lot to me. Beverly

skyshine

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since 2002-02-07

Posts 3058
Beneath the northern stars

5 posted 2003-06-25 12:50 PM

This is really beautiful! Welcome to Passions! Please check your email for a special message.

~Elizabeth

Dreams last for so long, even after you're gone...
~Jewel

altoladybj
Member

since 2003-06-24

Posts 79
Pennsylvania

6 posted 2003-06-25 08:22 PM

Elizabeth,

Thank you for the kind words regarding my poem and thank you also for the special message in my email. I have really appreciated the warm welcome I've received here.

Beverly

2dalimit
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since 2000-02-08

Posts 2228
Mississippi coast

7 posted 2003-06-27 06:42 AM

His masterpiece is awesome as well as your poem.

Thanks,
Melton

altoladybj
Member

since 2003-06-24

Posts 79
Pennsylvania

8 posted 2003-06-27 10:30 AM

2dalimit,

He is an awesome God. Your warm remark has warmed my heart, thanks,

Beverly

Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

9 posted 2003-06-27 01:23 PM

(smiles) Yay!!! Oh Beverly, this is such a gorgeous debut, sweet friend, no artist is as brilliant or inventive as Him and to be able to paint like he does too is all His idea! (big hugggssssss) This is wonderful, I love it! Welcome to Passions, sweet Beverly, may you be inspired by all of us here as we will all be inspired by your lovely words! I can't wait to read more of your lovely poetry, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Beverly, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

Underneath your clothes, there's an endless story

***Shakira***

altoladybj
Member

since 2003-06-24

Posts 79
Pennsylvania

10 posted 2003-06-27 06:51 PM

Dear Noah,

I cannot begin to thank you for the love and warmth conveyed in your remarks on my poem. It is always my prayer that my poems will touch hearts for his glory. Dear Friend in Christ, love and blessings to you always.

Beverly

Songbird
Member Elite

since 1999-12-15

Posts 2184
Missouri

11 posted 2003-07-02 12:53 PM

You are certainly a poet. I love your poems and if I don't comment on everyone of them, I am reading them.

altoladybj
Member

since 2003-06-24

Posts 79
Pennsylvania

12 posted 2003-07-02 11:18 AM

Songbird,

Thank you for your very kind reply. I'm so glad you enjoy my poems. God Bless you,

Beverly

MysticDreamer
Member

since 2003-04-21

Posts 131

13 posted 2003-07-03 05:00 AM

Beautiful Write. I like the picture you painted with those colorful words.

altoladybj
Member

since 2003-06-24

Posts 79
Pennsylvania

14 posted 2003-07-03 03:10 PM

MysticDreamer,

I'm so glad you liked my word painting. Thank you for commenting.

Beverly

ambrish
Member

since 2003-03-27

Posts 257
India

15 posted 2003-07-04 02:09 AM

a beautiful poem

altoladybj
Member

since 2003-06-24

Posts 79
Pennsylvania

16 posted 2003-07-04 12:59 PM

ambrish, thank you for the reply about my poem, I'm glad you liked it.

Beverly

Bob Gotti
Senior Member

since 2003-06-07

Posts 895
United States

17 posted 2003-07-05 11:33 PM

What a beautiful description of God's Eternal Masterpiece, I can't wait to
see it all from an eternal perspective.

   Have a  \\\|///  Blessed Day
            (o   o)
   ---oOO-(_)-OOo---

But as for me, I watch in hope
for the LORD, I wait for God my
Savior; My God will hear me.
(Micah 7:7)

Bob Gotti

altoladybj
Member

since 2003-06-24

Posts 79
Pennsylvania

18 posted 2003-07-06 01:16 AM

Bob, I also look forward to seeing his masterpiece from an eternal perspective. Bless you for your very kind comments.

Beverly

scorpio
Member Ascendant

since 2002-10-02

Posts 5178
right...there

19 posted 2003-07-08 07:11 PM

I enjoyed this write...He does create masterpieces..

believe in what your heart feels...

altoladybj
Member

since 2003-06-24

Posts 79
Pennsylvania

20 posted 2003-07-08 07:32 PM

Scorpio, I'm glad you enjoyed my write. Thanks for stopping by.

Beverly

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