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MysticDreamer
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0 posted 2003-05-05 03:38 PM


The Pauper's Seed

What remains to be seen.
Fit for King and Queen,
Held in high esteem,
Resides in such estate?

How many or How few.
Beholding such a view,
By Love or by Virtue,
Would pass through this gate?

And finding what in deed.
Sowed the Pauper's seed,
To flower or to weed,
The losses and the gains.

When all is said and done.
Still blossoming in the sun,
Our Hearts becoming One,
Truth that forever Remains.


This is about a poor soul that looks ahead to his passing and wonders who might care or even notice. Then he sees the lives of those he touched and realizes he was as rich as anyone.
  


[This message has been edited by MysticDreamer (05-05-2003 04:49 PM).]

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ljossberir
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1 posted 2003-05-05 07:42 PM


very beautiful poem! & really creative, I like it. The rhyme scheme is also very impressive.
-matt

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2 posted 2003-05-10 02:09 PM




(big hugggsssssss) This is beautifully heartfelt, sweet friend, I truly am blessed that we have the ability to touch others hearts and for that I am thankful I could bring a smile to their hearts! (sigh) Philanthropy truly hopes so many things and I pray the whole world can engage in such a assembly soon, sweet friend, God Bless You, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet friend, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

Underneath your clothes, there's an endless story

***Shakira***

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3 posted 2006-06-15 03:06 PM


MysticDreamer~
What thoughtful seeds of poetry to find in the archives~
Thank you~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~
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sandgrain
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4 posted 2006-06-15 09:42 PM


This is beautiful.  I'm sure glad someone brought it up again.


    Rae

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