Da Dues, Da Docks, Da Dirt

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Lighthousebob
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since 2000-06-14

Posts 4725
California

0 posted 2003-03-23 11:34 PM

Da Dues, Da Docks,
Da Dirt

Even children know
That we dress up for church
In our Sunday's best ...

Da Dues, Da Docks, Da Dirt.

Little Haley says
Dressed in her Sunday's smirk,
"Me got dem all ...

Da Dues, Da Docks, Da Dirt."

"Dues go on da feet!!!
Docks go on dem first!!!
Cover up dem boo-boos
With a pitty dirt!!!

Me go to Dunday Dool!!!
Come on it won't hurt ..."
Little Haley says,

"Da Dues, Da Docks, Da Dirt."

-Lighthouse Bob

Joyce Johnson

Member Rara Avis

since 2001-03-10

Posts 9912
Washington State

1 posted 2003-03-24 12:21 PM

Cute. cute, cute. Joyce

Enchantress
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since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

2 posted 2003-03-24 08:47 AM

Ah! Thanks for the morning smiles!
~Hugs & Smiles, Nancy~

~Somewhere in my heart I'm always
dancing with you in the summer rain~

mysticpoe
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since 2003-02-28

Posts 883

3 posted 2003-03-24 09:33 AM

Hi Bob, very creative and enjoyable.

mysticpoe

GG
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since 2002-12-03

Posts 3532
Lost in thought

4 posted 2003-03-24 09:55 AM

lol quite cute!
Very enjoyable, like it alot

though I always got sunday school and the sermon too... tic tac toe for me

Always, Alyssa

- And so it was that time stood still -
(blink, breathe, stand, fight)

Mistletoe Angel

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since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

5 posted 2003-03-24 02:18 PM

(giggles in delight) Yay! Oh my gosh, this is sooooo cute, sweet friend, yep yep yep, I put all of dem on too everyn Sunday, yay! (big hugggsssssss) You always make me smile with your wonderful poetry, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Robert, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

Dark Angel
Member Patricius

since 1999-08-04

Posts 10095

6 posted 2003-03-24 03:06 PM

hehe this is soooo cute... thanks for the grin I have now from ear to ear.

Maree

maybe_one_day
Junior Member

since 2003-03-17

Posts 23
Canada

7 posted 2003-03-24 06:14 PM

Lovely poem, very cute, I agree, but I got an umderlying message about something quite different. I thought some of it to mean that there is too much emphasis on the "logistics" of church because they are so much more tangable. Anyways, if that's not what you meant, sorry, that's just what I got out of it. Thanks!

jjote
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since 2002-12-25

Posts 1088
Ontario, Canada

8 posted 2003-03-25 04:41 AM

"Da Dues, Da Docks, Da Dirt."

put on Da shoes, Da socks, and let the children play with Da dirt..and never mind they're wearing their Sunday best.

hehe, funny - I don't know if that's your message - it is, to me.

Just peeked in - wish I could be here at piptalk often. I'm missing a lot of good reads, from the titles that I scan.

Flower
Member

since 2003-03-15

Posts 240
California

9 posted 2003-04-08 02:45 PM

Cute! Really cute.

Love reading all these great writes.
I write not!

Mysteria

Member Laureate

since 2001-03-07

Posts 18328
British Columbia, Canada

10 posted 2003-04-09 05:02 AM

Darn dorable! Your sense of humor is showing here and I like it.

Jjote, I will have the second comment removed not to worry!

Don't be too hard on yourself, even Einstein
had trouble tying his shoelaces.

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