Spiritual Journeys #2 |
Awareness |
whisperingwalt Member
since 2010-04-29
Posts 240Coquitlam, BC, Canada |
Awareness When I was younger I heard his whisper Then I began to think I thought about this I thought about that Then I began to do Do what I should Do what I could Do whatever I wanted As the years went by My life became complicated My thoughts so sophisticated Like the infamous Titanic I hit the iceberg of humility My ego sunk Fear paid me a visit Despair sent his regards Yet in the midnight of my soul I went for a walkabout And as looked to the sky The stars twinkled brightly back As God smiled at me In that moment of being I once again heard his whisper.... .....My love is. |
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Earl Brinkman Senior Member
since 2010-03-03
Posts 1183Osaka, Japan |
I guess people pretty much do what they want at times. But God is forgiving if we are truely sorry. Nice poem. |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
You need a special ear to hear a whisper, especially his. Well done! Welcome to Passions - hope to read more of your work.
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