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20toes
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since 2009-07-26
Posts 42
AZ, USA

0 posted 2010-03-02 11:20 AM


Sufferers of Six

The more time goes by

I start to shudder

The louder he speaks

The more he will stutter

He is so arrogant

Standing on that stage

He is starting

Starting a new age

The crowd goes wild

Their hands lifted high

Do not be fooled

He did not ascend from the sky

He rose from the sea

He brings to destroy

All they can see

Is he promises us joy

He took that blow

That blow to his head

Now the sky turns

A sickening red

The horns sprout out

The crowd pulls back

He pounces out

He begins his attack

I walk in the clouds, I sing in the dust

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Earl Brinkman
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since 2010-03-03
Posts 1183
Osaka, Japan
1 posted 2010-03-03 07:23 AM


The way that I interpret this is that some sort of anti-christ figure has arrived from the sea - almost as if he were Poseidon.  I am a bit confused as to why we should fear him if he has a bump on his head.  I do like the imagery that you have created.
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