Spiritual Journeys #2 |
The Line |
Lighthousebob Member Elite
since 2000-06-14
Posts 4725California |
As we are traveling through from mortal to divine, keep your eyes upon the portal, on the distant hidden line that, when drawn between the masses, will, in itself, define which ones of us are risen and which are left behind. |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
Loved your use of a straight line too Bob, this gets the message out loud and clear. |
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Lighthousebob Member Elite
since 2000-06-14
Posts 4725California |
Thank you Sharon, This was a very quickly written poem that I originally wrote in regular format, but, then, I thought, hey, wait a minute, writing this as a single line would really do well to emphasize the message here, soooooo, Ta-Da! Here it is! Anyway, I really do appreciate that you agree that the way this poem is formatted helps to get its message across. Hip-Hip-Hooray and God bless, -Bob |
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sandgrain Member Elite
since 1999-09-21
Posts 3662Sycamore, IL, USA |
I totally agree, Bob. Brilliant thought! Thanks for sharing it. God bless, Rae |
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2dalimit Member Elite
since 2000-02-08
Posts 2228Mississippi coast |
...keep your eyes upon the portal... Excellent. Thanks, Melton |
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Lighthousebob Member Elite
since 2000-06-14
Posts 4725California |
Rae, thank for your encouraging words of appreciation and, Melton, agreeing with a big smile, I certainly will do that! God bless to both of you, -Bob |
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