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faeriemythc Junior Member
since 2009-06-18
Posts 40KY |
This is my first attempt at posting on here. Let me know what you think. The Beauty of... The beauty of a mountain as the sun touches it's face. The beauty of a rose as the dew falls into place. The beauty of a child's laughter as it rings out true and clear. The beauty of a loved one as a hug draws you near. The beauty of a parent with eyes so loving kind. The beauty of all these things can fill your heart and mind. The beauty of the world can never quite compare, To the beauty of God's love as you lift your hands in prayer. aka Carmen |
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Alison 
since 2008-01-27
Posts 9318Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy! |
Again, welcome to PiP. I think that the message of this poem is sweet and pure. The poem, itself, flows beautifully. It sounds like a child's prayer to me - and that is beautiful. Alison |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Beautifully and sincerely penned. Hugs and welcome~Nancy Life isn't about how to survive the storm... |
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rockbabe Member
since 2006-01-29
Posts 105 |
Beautiful Yes |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
This is very lovely. I believe God expresses Himself through all the beauty of His creation, humanity included of course. Love, Margherita |
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jjbreunig3 Member
since 2009-07-29
Posts 423Maine, USA |
A lovely piece; I would suggest that you make "4 line" stanzas, seeing that you are rhyming the even numbered lines. Also spelling is important, it's should be its. The contraction it's represents "it is". --Joe Logic, when applied to people, fails miserably! --Joseph J. Breunig 3rd |
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