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Anniepimm
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since 2008-12-26
Posts 550
England

0 posted 2008-12-26 12:40 PM



The Last Note

Living in the confines of my head
There is one thing that invades my mind
That is; the thought of you
Is it so tragic that i still love you "but you no longer love me"
What went wrong?
Trying to work things out in my mind
Makes my head ache with the negative thoughts
Of what i have lost

I was stupid! for a short time
Didn't know what i had done
But! it has all flooded back to me
I was wrong to betray you
I couldn't think! so confused
But it's clear now in my mind
All the hurt and the pain
Clear now of the meds
That lingered in my brain

I will go now! my love
I will go and leave you in peace
So sorry; for the sad life i gave you
But now i am sorted and OK
So i will say goodbye my son
Don't cry when i am gone
Just read the note i have left you
And know my spirit lives on

Annie
15=10=2008

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Margherita
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since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236
Eternity
1 posted 2008-12-26 07:07 PM


This is well written, yet so very sad, dear Annie. The relationship between parents and children can deteriorate sometimes for the strangest reasons. But don't wait to reach out to your son, the time of forgiveness and understanding is now.
Love and light.
Margherita

"Love is the One who masters all things;
I am mastered totally by Love."
(Rumi)

Anniepimm
Senior Member
since 2008-12-26
Posts 550
England
2 posted 2008-12-26 08:11 PM


I fear it to late now Margherita,
He has already gone, It has been three years now, he was only 29..
And thank you for your lovely comments

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