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undead warhead
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since 2008-11-22
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0 posted 2008-11-22 05:06 PM


In the last summer God the all father
appeared in my dream from aether
He said the world is His concern
And his Son will soon return
"You are the one, who will sow the seed of my son"

At daytime I was working in my farm
At night I studied with holy books on my arm
Then my thoughts were clear
"Dad, have no fear, your commands I have heard!"

I drove my car to the great city
I wandered around and looked for someone pretty
Then I saw her, a womb for the Holy one to transfer

"Dad, she will give birth to your child
I hope you are happy with my style
Will I have the angels to protect
from the devil and police suspect?"

I talked to her in the local bar
Telling about my personal war
When she went to the bathroom
I was filled with a thrill
I laced her drink, slipped in a pill
And carried Maria to my car with divine will

I shouldn't lose the divine mother
I chained her to the bed like in a brothel
I cleaned my mind with fasting
So the breeding will be pure and lasting

Finally God told me when
I may sow the holy seed without sin
My faith gave me power
And within hour the deed was over

"Father, may I tell you happy news
Virgin Mary is pregnant with the son of yours
The triumph of light will soon come to be
And the godless will not live that to see"

© Copyright 2008 undead warhead - All Rights Reserved
Tom Zart
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since 2006-05-18
Posts 682

1 posted 2008-11-23 02:56 PM


Wonderful words of the passion of faith.

Tom Zart

undead warhead
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since 2008-11-22
Posts 11

2 posted 2008-12-04 11:05 AM


Great you liked it
Stephanos
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Statesboro, GA, USA
3 posted 2008-12-06 11:04 PM


The muddle of the impure and the pure was quite interesting ...ie Divine sonship by fornication or rape.  Did you intend this poem as a portrayal of someone deluded into thinking they were holy and doing the divine will?  

Stephen


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