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Songbird
Member Elite
since 1999-12-15
Posts 2184
Missouri

0 posted 2008-10-25 12:04 PM



Me, I
Money
Pleasure
Prestige
Self

I and Me
Built pedestals
To sit on
So we could Relax in comfort
Feeling fulfilled
Forgetting others
Have needs

Empty stomachs
Cry out in pain

Do we hear their cries?
Do our ears hear them?
Those needing our arms to hold them
Our Kisses to their cheeks

Do we hear them calling out to us?
Needing love
Small bits of the time
We spend in pleasure
Or the money we've wasted
Looking for a dopamine fix

They question
Are they important to us?

Their tears fall
Saying good-by
To sisters, brothers
Parents, family and friends

Wondering if they will be next
In line to perish

We hold on to our money
Like it will save us
From what
Poverty?
Do we know what true poverty really is?

We value our storehouses
Like they
Are the most important
Things we own

When hurricane winds
Rip them away
Who will be our true friend?

Who will reach out to us?

Where will we then find love?
Will it be from the ones
Our feet have crushed
On our way up
The ladder
The cold metal tool we placed our feet upon
Climbing to the top
Thinking when we reached the summit
We'd find satisfaction

Who will reach out to us?
Will it be the ones
We thought bowed
At our feet?

Who will bow to our God of money
When all we have left is each other?


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shortsleeves
Member
since 2008-10-19
Posts 125
Franklin Tennessee
1 posted 2008-10-27 04:47 PM


Beautiful work! Yes, who will it be, if not my self?
Love,
Hal

jody5
Senior Member
since 2005-12-21
Posts 876
California, U.S.A.
2 posted 2008-11-21 03:04 AM


That was deep Songbird.  You really captured your feelings and thoughts of alot of people now in the strange economy.  There are people who are going hungry in the USA and they don't know why their stomachs ache.  Loved your work        


sandgrain
Member Elite
since 1999-09-21
Posts 3662
Sycamore, IL, USA
3 posted 2008-11-21 03:50 PM


So much truth packed in this great piece!  Yes, to many, money has become their "god".  They hold a higher priority for climbing the social ladder than following Christ.  Let's pray they all turn to Chirst before their ladder crumbles.

God bless,
  Rae

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