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SkaaDee
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since 2008-04-07
Posts 116
Canada

0 posted 2008-08-09 11:58 PM



I write to you now
hunched over a typewriter
in a basement of a suburban home
on planet Earth.
I can tell you that parents
still tuck their children in with a kiss and
feeling still spills from the pens of poets -
elderly given priority on transit
and bread lines.  
I can say that thought is still given
to those abused and neglected in
the name of the whole but marches end
prematurely -
musicians are still searching
for that note - practitioners still heal.
If you find this,
I want you to know that
sunsets and Autumns are still
beheld and cratfsmen still toast
their creations.
Don't worry
nor
feel shame -
enough hands have been joined.


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Danny Cobb
Member
since 2008-07-09
Posts 74

1 posted 2008-08-13 10:36 PM


i just don't know where you are coming from or going with this one--the voice seems divided.
  may you can give some explanation of it so i can appreciate it more!

   danny cobb

SkaaDee
Member
since 2008-04-07
Posts 116
Canada
2 posted 2008-08-14 11:10 PM


I think it's one that works for you or just doesn't

depending on one's beliefs as to Mankinds role in the universe and the nature of Oneness.


thanks for the comment.

Margherita
Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236
Eternity
3 posted 2008-08-17 09:19 AM


Instead of the bottle the capsule, I love this idea.

And I love the letter too. He KNOWS, most certainly. Shame? No reason for that! No one is to blame ... we are still in the learning process.

Very nice work.

Love,
Margherita

SkaaDee
Member
since 2008-04-07
Posts 116
Canada
4 posted 2008-08-17 09:33 PM


thank you Margherita

I'm very happy you like my poem.
It came to me very quickly and
it was a joy to put down on paper.



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