Spiritual Journeys #2 |
i cry |
Allstaria22 Member
since 2000-06-11
Posts 83MN USA |
sometimes when I'm alone and I can't keep it in any more sometimes when I'm surrounded and feel out of place when memories weight me down and regret and fear consume me when I feel I've done nothing right and everything wrong when I know I don't deserve what I have but still want more when I can't forgive when I need hope when all I want is to give up and sleep forever I cry tears of heartache when my soul is wounded and my faith is tested but every tear I cry is counted and caught in His hands and every weeping moment is spent in His arms my tears may be of pain my tears may be of sadness but the comfort is of God who hates to see me cry but knows sometimes I need to. Isaiah 1:18 |
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shattered-smiles Member
since 2008-01-20
Posts 247inside the shadows |
I like this poem a lot. It really expresses who I am actually, even though it might not seem like it if you've read some of my other poetry. TJ So cut me into pieces and tape me into something beautiful... |
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Again Junior Member
since 2008-05-13
Posts 47 |
This poem expresses how I felt for a while but have not been able to find the right words. Its very theraputic. Thanks for your thoughts they make a difference. =) |
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Lighthousebob Member Elite
since 2000-06-14
Posts 4725California |
Your poem as well as the shortest scripture written in The Bible reminds me of my humanity and the caring nature of Jesus in that "He wept" and, so, I am encouraged in knowing that I am never alone in my sorrow, in my sadness, and in my humanity because Jesus and his character are the same yesterday, today, and forever and, even today, I truly believe that Jesus is touched by the feelings of our infirmities and that, when we cry, he does cry right here beside us. I enjoyed reading your poem very much, thank you for sharing it, and Gob bless you, -Bob |
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sindhu New Member
since 2008-05-12
Posts 2karnataka, India |
Good Real good Allstaria22 I loved it !! |
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sandgrain Member Elite
since 1999-09-21
Posts 3662Sycamore, IL, USA |
There's a reason God gave us emotions and tears. Just knowing He is caring and compassionate often helps us feel comforted. When we look at all He suffered, willingly, in His love for us, the emotion of overwhelming thankfulness washes over us. Thank you for sharing this piece. God bless, Rae |
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sufipoems Junior Member
since 2008-06-14
Posts 13 |
simply touching.need to have it,right thru the heart. |
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