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SkaaDee
Member

since 2008-04-07

Posts 116
Canada

0 posted 2008-04-13 12:16 PM

Gravestones are hidden by snow today
signaling hope of reprieve on its way.
Arise with the frosty melt of spring.
Soar with returning friends of wing.

Unforgiving fog hid the moon last night
relieving stars of their sentry plight.
Sleep well nightly diamond guide.
Lead us tomorrow to the other side.

Shadow cast over loving hearts,
rivers freed of their persistent flow,
autumn flowers,
winter trees.
Storm clouds haunting life below.

Nothing is amiss, this is for you.

Rise for us.
Shine for us.

All returns with Spring morning dew.

[This message has been edited by SkaaDee (04-15-2008 11:58 PM).]

Inspired-8
Member

since 2008-04-14

Posts 311
Pluto

1 posted 2008-04-14 03:11 AM

Beautiful imagery nice flow.

Inspired-8

Marge Tindal

Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

2 posted 2008-04-14 08:21 AM

Scotty~
This is lovely ... lovely~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~
Email - noles1@totcon.com

starwatcher
New Member

since 2008-05-05

Posts 4
The Caribean

3 posted 2008-05-05 09:59 AM

Hi skadee... very moving beautiful imagery,I loved the first line,I will be looking for more of yours.

starwatcher
New Member

since 2008-05-05

Posts 4
The Caribean

4 posted 2008-05-05 10:22 AM

Hi skadee... very moving beautiful imagery,I loved the first line,I will be looking for more of yours.

Songbird
Member Elite

since 1999-12-15

Posts 2184
Missouri

5 posted 2008-05-08 11:32 PM

Very lovely and it had special meaning to me.

sandgrain
Member Elite

since 1999-09-21

Posts 3662
Sycamore, IL, USA

6 posted 2008-05-15 02:48 PM

How very descriptive your spring morning is! Thank you for sharing this.

God bless,
Rae

Again
Junior Member

since 2008-05-13

Posts 47

7 posted 2008-05-15 08:02 PM

This poem rocks...its really good and descriptive. I am learning from your ways and your choice of words. Write more please.

Lincoln
Member

since 2007-12-03

Posts 62
Earth

8 posted 2008-05-16 08:38 PM

I loved it

"When your deepest thoughts are broken, keep on dreaming boy, cause when you stop dreaming it's time to die." -Shannon Hoon

SkaaDee
Member

since 2008-04-07

Posts 116
Canada

9 posted 2008-07-31 10:35 PM

Thanks very much everyone.
Sorry I took so long to acknowledge
your kind comments.
Very inspiring.

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