Spiritual Journeys #2 |
The Battle of Broken Wounds |
pink panther 08 New Member
since 2007-12-09
Posts 7Valdosta,Ga |
Date: 2007 Suffering, like a fish with out water. My strenghth is gone. One breath at a time. I am starting to dig my six feet from head to toe. The Sun is going down thier is no hope,freezing like a block of Ice, shivering allover. My Last breath is gone now. Bright lights all around Doctors, Nurses as far as my eyes can see. Warm agine like the sun has been brought to me. Blood everywhere like dark red wine, spilt all over a new sheet. New and Old faces that I don't know, but I have been told I do. Emotions flow down all at once. Fear emotion of fright Sadness emotion of no doubts Happiness emotion of joy and hope I was scard of what has happened to me. Sad that I didn't know anything, and I didn't know these faces, and may die. Happy that these people got to see me agine, and God Almighty God was willing to give me another chance. Britt |
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roseofwinter Junior Member
since 2007-12-03
Posts 12 |
It is a wonderful experience when the Lord gives you a second chance. I know this from personal experience and am not afraid anymore. Thank you for this piece, it reminds me once again to be thankful.... |
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sandgrain Member Elite
since 1999-09-21
Posts 3662Sycamore, IL, USA |
What a great, kind, powerful teacher God is! The near death experience instills a deeper appreciation for each hour of life. We must remember that lesson when things go wrong later on, to keep things in proper perspective. I'm glad for your second chance and welcome you to this great poetry site. Rae |
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