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musicgirl3698
New Member

since 2007-08-16

Posts 4

0 posted 2007-08-16 09:29 AM

Dear Lord,
I don't want fame,
I don't want money,
all I ask of you
is to help me
help others

Dear Lord,
I want to be like you
give food to the hungry,
and care for the sick.
I want to love as you love
and to live as you live

My Lord,
I want to bring others to you
I want to shed light
I want to lead others away
from the darkness
from the fright.

I want to stop all the violence
I want to help save the world
but Lord, help me first
Understand myself

Marge Tindal

Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

1 posted 2007-08-16 09:48 AM

MusicGirl~
Welcome to PiP ... this is a lovely piece~
Enjoy your stay with us~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~
Email - noles1@totcon.com

FadingSun
Member

since 2000-05-01

Posts 76
Southern California

2 posted 2007-08-16 11:38 AM

yes, this is most definitely a beautiful prayer! And of course, welcome to passions in poetry!

In the sight of Love, fear isn't even as great as a single hair: in the law of Love, everything is offered as a sacrifice

Lighthousebob
Member Elite

since 2000-06-14

Posts 4725
California

3 posted 2007-08-16 05:47 PM

MusicGirl,

W E L C O M E

What a Wonderful fist post. WOW!!!
You expressed here a very sweet and tender heart
(very humble and Godly) and I believe that a  prayer
like this one is truly music to God’s ears and will most assuredly
be answered and I do, also, think that  you made a Great point at the end of
your poem— It truly truly does all begin with us at the center most parts of our hearts because
the most simple acts of kindness and of humility of which you’ve expressed in this poem
do indeed go a long long way in beginning to make  this world a much better place. Amen.

God bless you, again, Welcome, and I do hope that you’ll be back to post some more of your Beautiful Beautiful poetry (music) here with us.

-Bob

Deep Blue
Member

since 2007-05-27

Posts 73

4 posted 2007-08-19 01:03 PM

Very nice write, innocently, pure and beautifully said. How wonderful would life be if we all would follow and practice it.

Joyce Johnson

Member Rara Avis

since 2001-03-10

Posts 9912
Washington State

5 posted 2007-08-23 11:00 AM

lThis is a perfect prayer and God will bless it. Love, Joyce

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