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getscript
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0 posted 2007-08-06 08:14 PM




if you take
with need not great
walk in streets dug deep
the air you breath will suffer
the breaking seasons alter
so as to burn your feet.

............................

one pain releves another
but the heart can suffer
when fear rises
hopes recided
all thats good seems hidden

.............................
by Daniel Meadowcroft

Both wrote in 2 mins


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hunnie_girl
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1 posted 2007-08-06 10:43 PM


oh wow I guess i just found out about the two minutes too well dare I say in 3... tx for sharing.
Krysti

~fool me once shame on you, fool me twice shame on me~

Lighthousebob
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2 posted 2007-08-07 12:45 PM




getscript,

Ditto to what I just wrote in my last response, but I thought that these poems reminded me more of something out of the book of Proverbs. To me, they were both Wonderful Wonderful little jewels of wisdom.

Again, God bless, thank you for sharing, and Welcome to Passions!!!

-Bob


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