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Each Time I Kneel To Pray(Joyce's Challenge)
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Each Time I Kneel To Pray(Joyce's Challenge) |
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hunnie_girl
since 2006-06-18
Posts 2567Canada |
Each Time I Kneel To Pray Each Time I kneel to pray, I thank God for yesterday, all he's ever done for me, the stronger person he's helped me be, Each Time I kneel to pray, I thank God for today, he's taught me to believe in life, been there for every trial, every strife, Each Time I kneel to pray, I thank God for everyday, I pray for those who need a prayer, those who need someone there, Each Time I kneel to pray, I never run out of things to say. Next Challenge: What I wish I'd have done ~fool me once shame on you, fool me twice shame on me~ |
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Joyce Johnson
since 2001-03-10
Posts 9912Washington State |
Great response to my challenge, Hunnie girl. I'll have to have a little time to answer yours. love, Joyce |
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Lighthousebob Member Elite
since 2000-06-14
Posts 4725California |
Krysti, You did good at writing this poem and meeting Joyce's challenge. Good job! I really liked the progression of your poem (i.e. yesterday, today, and everyday) because it demonstrates to me that we do need to be Thankful to God all the time and my favorite line that brought a smile to my face was ... "the stronger person he's helped me be" ... well, I never thought of thanking Him for that, but I suppose it is a good thing that we are strangers to this land, because (it's true) we are just passing through. Amen. Again, nice poem and God bless, -Bob |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
A challenge well met Whatever is written from the heart is always beautiful Lz |
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Lighthousebob Member Elite
since 2000-06-14
Posts 4725California |
oooops!!! I see the mistake I made here. It's that small print. It gets me every time. Instead of stronger person (with an "o", I thought that you wrote stranger person (with an "a". My mistake, but, hey, both words work fine for me. Big Smiles. -Bob |
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hunnie_girl
since 2006-06-18
Posts 2567Canada |
Thank you all for your nice replies. hunnie. ~fool me once shame on you, fool me twice shame on me~ |
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