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lacydee
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0 posted 2007-07-26 12:59 PM



Praises to I AM


You are the colored threads woven in the tapestry of my life
You are the notes of music in my soul
You are all and more that I could imagine
You are mine and I am yours, forever whole.

You are symphonies playing in my heart
And grand illusions dancing in my head
My heart if full beyond comparing
With you beside me, I have nothing more to dread.

Before you, I never knew contentment
Never felt the wind upon my soul
Never had the best of everlasting
But I am yours and you are in control.

as for me and my house, we will serve the Lord.

© Copyright 2007 Deanna Lacy - All Rights Reserved
hunnie_girl
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1 posted 2007-07-26 03:22 PM


so very true... I loved the words.
hunnie.

~fool me once shame on you, fool me twice shame on me~

lacydee
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2 posted 2007-07-26 03:28 PM


thanks so much for your comment. I appreciate you reading my poem. Dee

as for me and my house, we will serve the Lord.

FadingSun
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3 posted 2007-07-26 11:57 PM


This poem swirled around my heart and gave it a hug. Do it again!    (please!)

In the sight of Love, fear isn't even as great as a single hair:  in the law of Love, everything is offered as a sacrifice

lacydee
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4 posted 2007-07-27 08:45 AM


what a sweet comment. Thanks so much, I'm glad you liked it. Dee...(I'll see what I can do to hug your heart again)*smiling*

as for me and my house, we will serve the Lord.

Lighthousebob
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5 posted 2007-07-27 07:25 PM


Dee,

Your poem was very very expressive and full of beautiful beautiful imagery. It's hard to pick a favorite expression, but I think the one that I liked the best was about the wind blowing on your soul. It was soooo freeing to me. It was like driving in a convertible with the top down. Anyway, I loved your whole poem.

God bless,

-Bob

lacydee
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6 posted 2007-07-27 08:41 PM


thank you so much Bob. I'm glad you liked what I wrote. Hmmm...I liked the reference to the convertable with the top down too. Freedom!!! thanks, Dee

as for me and my house, we will serve the Lord.

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