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When undotted i's stumble
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When undotted i's stumble |
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dwgpoet Member
since 2007-03-05
Posts 122FL, USA |
When undotted i's stumble When Woe to the man; “Who trips up these little ones;” with a long parade of eulogizers: colorless, miles underground; Who say “the soul lives somewhere.” Whose dreams pass sons through the fire; Where “‘no light will ever shine’” hope on their earth quandary, their dead-end alley: “tested in War?” “Why were humans here?” Whose charmers see a Triad image in aborted eyes; “where singers are never heard;” only embryos’ womb cries; “night cobra, creation Myth;” Whose data transfer online imbues a black holes collapse; where gravitational force induce technophobia; “where no craftsman is there found;” Whose totem poles transform sports; incarnating millionaires; where steroids masked FDA?; where apocalyptic cries “unconscious is beat the snitch!;” Where no millstone is there heard; where wives cheat alimony; “and no bride is ever heard in you again; because your ... for by your ... all were misled.” |
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jjote Senior Member
since 2002-12-25
Posts 1088Ontario, Canada |
why a "7" for best? Isn't that raising the bar too low? Anyway, I'm not sure yet where you're taking the reader with this -- a place which seems a foretaste of hell? maybe I'm just dense. Sorry. |
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dwgpoet Member
since 2007-03-05
Posts 122FL, USA |
Thank U, jjote. 7 Biblically is perfection. Your reply is close. Acts chapter 2 is my position. Hell is not as bad a place as is the inquisition. Compare Acts chapter 2: verse thirty-one's ressurection; then chapter 20: and verse 13 of Revelation; Chapter 18: verse 4 through 24, Revelation. |
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