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Shake
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since 2006-11-17
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0 posted 2006-11-17 11:25 PM


Join the Choir
By Shake

A flutter of silver golden wings,
Great beings dressed in white,
Each brighter than a star, glowing,
Their numbers are amassing, growing,
The chorus begins to sing,
’Tis truly an amazing sight,
Watching the heavens ring~
I looked over faces of friends long dead,
Then I understood the meaning,
I understood why we go through life,
The thought cut through me like a knife,
I perished the idea, fore I'd have to be dead,
But then I saw God gently beaming,
So I sprouted wings and joined the chorus overhead~


Dedicated To
Ashley,
Paige,
Kim,
Adrian,
Brooke,
Lea,
And Ashley

~See you in the chior


The meaning of this poem has to do with the

meaning of life.

Its sayin the reason we go through life,

is to earn our spot in the chior,

aka Heaven
Feedback appreciated!

© Copyright 2006 J. Maree - All Rights Reserved
hunnie_girl
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1 posted 2006-11-21 12:30 PM


But then I saw God gently beaming,
So I sprouted wings and joined the chorus overhead

~very much enjoyed the ending it brought a smile to my face. WELCOME TO PASSIONS!!! I hope to read more soon.
hunnie

A time to love, and a time to hate; a time of war and a time for peace   ~Ecclesiastes 3:8~

sandgrain
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2 posted 2006-11-21 02:47 PM


A delightful poem!  It's in memory of so many.  Sorry you've had to experience all those losses.

Welcome to these blue pages.  

Have a Happy Thanksgiving!

    Rae  

Marge Tindal
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3 posted 2006-11-21 03:29 PM


Shake~
Welcome to the pages of poetic blue~

Such a tender penning~

*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~
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Pressie
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since 2006-11-14
Posts 157
Oklahoma
4 posted 2006-11-22 12:01 PM


Thanks for sharing Shake!

Welcome to the blue pages!

Omnia vincit amor

TP

Musicmaker1969
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5 posted 2006-11-26 05:25 PM


Beautiful.  Sounds like it is a dedication to friends long gone home.  And one day, yes, we too will join that choir in Heaven and sing the chouruses of God.

Musicmaker1969

Jesus is my Rock, music is my sanity.
Sheri Liegh Adams
sheri1969@gmail.com

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