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hex
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since 2006-08-23
Posts 33


0 posted 2006-10-20 04:06 PM


Jesus Has Come! And With His Blood


Jesus has come!And with His blood
Will cleanse our sin-stained soul.
With His love He can make all good
And He will make us whole!

Joined through our Lord we are but one;
This bond will never break!
In spirit we will never part.
We of one feast partake!

Through Christ’s blood we are made His own;
Through him we’re joined in heart.
We are made same through Christ the son;
We will not from Him part!

We are all children of the Lord!
Let this e’er be in mind.
Remember now Jesus Christ’s word:
“I’m with you for all time.”

Abide with me fast falls the eventide.
  Henry F. Lyte

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rhia_5779
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since 2006-06-09
Posts 1334
California
1 posted 2006-10-21 08:04 AM


From him part?

Grammar! Part from him. It doesn't sound as good when you are trying just trying to ryme, if you mess up the grammar

hex
Junior Member
since 2006-08-23
Posts 33

2 posted 2006-10-22 06:51 PM


I have to respectfully disagree.  "from him part" is perfectly good grammar.  It is just that you would not hear it put that way in speech or in prose.

While I do agree that one should not go all out in an attempt to rhyme something, I think that part runs smoothly.

Abide with me fast falls the eventide.
  Henry F. Lyte

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