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jenny
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since 2006-03-30
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0 posted 2006-09-11 09:08 PM



This  is my way of saying hello
it is called

Hope it comes to pass

There is so much love on this earth

That i  am looking forward to the new rebirth.

I hope it comes to pass .

This world is losing its class.

These men had family and friends.

This is not the way their lives should end.

All there songs are not getting a chance to be sung.

Why did they have to die so young

Peter Brock had his foot to the floor he and Steve Irwin had so much to live for.

Steve Irwin and Peter Brock, there death has put the world in to all mighty shock

It is so not fair.

There family has lost that love and care.

We now have to watch them try and start a new.

They will now have a different point of view.

Terri s children only 8 and 3 roamed that park.

But now for awhile they lost that spark.

He is watching over them and letting them know deep in there hearts he will never let go

So no matter what happens here they know we all have a love to share .

© Copyright 2006 jenny - All Rights Reserved
Musicmaker1969
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1 posted 2006-11-10 04:11 AM


Jenny, a very moving poem about how Steve Irwin's death affected so many people.  Very moving and I know a few people who would cry at reading your poem.  Thank you for remembering those now gone from this world.

Sheri Adams

Jesus lives in my heart!  He can in yours too!!!
Sheri Liegh Adams
sheriliegh@sympatico.ca

Margherita
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2 posted 2006-11-10 07:58 AM


Poignant poem, dear Jenny!

Love,
Margherita

Marge Tindal
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3 posted 2006-11-10 02:54 PM


HelloJennyDear~
I loved seeing that you had been in to visit PiP~

Write me an email ...
the last one that I sent to you was returned to me~

*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~
Email -         noles1@totcon.com     

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