Spiritual Journeys #2 |
Daddy's Hands |
Stardust198021225 New Member
since 2006-07-16
Posts 3 |
Looking out the window looking at the world Stangely scared to realize I'm still a little girl.For many tears I have sat here and cryed wondering why he had to die.I ask myself what do I do now ,daddy I have to make in this big world somehow.A little scared to spread my wings afraid of what this life might bring.I spent my life in your arms with daddy their was never any harm.And now I am all alone in this world without you daddy I am a scared little girl.I sit at this window and watch the sun rise with painted saddows of prelit skies.I ask myself where I stand ,and realize I'll be alright because even though he's in heaven I still hold daddys hand. |
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Tom Zart Senior Member
since 2006-05-18
Posts 682 |
Wonderful poem of love. |
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the quell Member
since 2006-07-19
Posts 144Liverpool, UK |
Absolutely beautiful. Heartbreaking to read, and to identify with. You managed to convey such desperation and loneliness. Lovely work. Where black, bleeding roses await the Thirteen, |
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Joyce Johnson
since 2001-03-10
Posts 9912Washington State |
All departed Daddys should be mourned like this. Love, Joyce |
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Venus1974 Member
since 2006-07-15
Posts 79Tennessee, USA |
sweet and loving Peace and happiness to us all, Venus |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
So very touching and beautiful. |
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sandgrain Member Elite
since 1999-09-21
Posts 3662Sycamore, IL, USA |
A lump in my throat but a smile on my face because you've turned the sadness into a warm acceptance. Thanks for sharing this. Rae |
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