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Debo Member
since 2006-04-18
Posts 321Texas U.S.A. |
He's the water in the desert When your soul begins to thirst Just call on the name of Jesus The master of the universe. When Jesus comes in glory Robotan will melt with heat And all his molten ashes Will worship at Jesus feet. The blinding web that spiderman Has woven to keep me bound Will burst and I'll be free to shout When God's feet touches ground. No he's not a metalic robot Fashioned by the hands of men Death and hell is not his goal He came to save you from your sin. He's the water in the desert When your soul begins to thirst Just call on the name of Jesus The Master of the Universe. He-man will shake and tremble Godzilla will flee in fright And all our super heros Will be blinded by the light. Superman will lose his strenght Brownman will sound retreat And all the Gods on childrens shows Will kiss the Masters feet. The A-team's plan won't come together On that final judgement day Thor, the Hulk, and Iceman Their hearts will melt away. Plasticman's great stretching arms Can't reach to pull me down I'll go to meet God in the air When I hear that Trumpet sound. He's the water in the desert When your soul begins to thirst Just call on the name of Jesus The Master of the Universe. Here's to you Daddy for all the music That you put in my heart... Debo |
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poettothecars Senior Member
since 2006-02-10
Posts 1093New Zealand |
while I like the idea behind your poem it is hard to say, that this is a good poem Because in ways of technique and rhyme this has problems in keeping a solid rhythm In saying that there is not a true pattern to your writing and the result is lost on such a great and perfect idea to base your writing on a poet who cares |
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Debo Member
since 2006-04-18
Posts 321Texas U.S.A. |
Well this is not a poem it is a song Now is that better Debo |
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Bob Gotti Senior Member
since 2003-06-07
Posts 895United States |
That is beautiful Debo, and your love for Christ shines through, but His Light may not always pierce through the blinders that Satan has on many people. You just keep shouting for The Lord my dear friend, and others will hear and see His Light. In Christ's Love, Bob Gotti / http://www.poeticpulpit.com/ He's coming very soon, the signs are very clear, And when that trumpet sounds, we’ll be otta here! Waiting in Him with Great Expectation, Bob Gott [This message has been edited by Bob Gotti (04-28-2006 12:09 PM).] |
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Debo Member
since 2006-04-18
Posts 321Texas U.S.A. |
Thank you Bob for that nice reply. And thank you God for giving me these words to write. Debo |
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sandgrain Member Elite
since 1999-09-21
Posts 3662Sycamore, IL, USA |
Sure glad I caught this gem! I love the idea of relating todays heros to our one and only real hero, Jesus. It says a lot. So often I think of this type thing when people are paying high prices for a ball signed by a player or music signed by the author. What price, one wonders, do they place on the word of our Lord. Thank you for sharing this piece. Rae |
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