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Spiritual Journeys #2

Your Love Shows

ErikaStaples
Junior Member

since 2005-12-19

Posts 24
SC

0 posted 2006-03-03 10:11 PM

Your Love Shows

Your eye is the sky
your strength is mountain peeks.
Rain drops are your cries
and snow is your happy weeps.

Your soul is the wind,
and your secrets blow by.
Your heart hides behind
the setting sun in your eye.

Your weakness is the ocean waves
letting every pain wash away,
and waterfalls show you are brave
forgiving every yesterday.

Your mystery lies in the depths of canyons
and flows through clear streams.
Open meadows show compassion
stretching endless as the dreams.

Your anger erupts through volcanoes
and the lightening in your eye
but each day your hidden heart shows
through the setting sun in the sky.

Hope can die in an instant
but forever dreams carry on.
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Gospel Kid 1
Junior Member

since 2006-02-28

Posts 30
U.S. IN.

1 posted 2006-03-04 06:23 PM

enjoyed your poem reads well and flows well also.

Musicmaker1969

Senior Member

since 2000-06-25

Posts 589
Peterborough, Ontario Canada

2 posted 2006-03-07 09:35 PM

A beautifully visual poem. I enjoyed reading it very much. The rhyme is a little off but otherwise it is very well written and so visual. I love visual poems. While reading yours, I could see what you were writing. Excellent thought put into this and very perceptive in your thoughts. Excellent!
Sheri Adams

Jesus lives in my heart! He can in yours too!!!
Sheri Liegh Adams
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