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Spiritual Journeys #2

Give It To Me

Michael the 3rd
Junior Member

since 2006-02-02

Posts 10
Oregon, USA

0 posted 2006-02-02 10:23 PM

"Give It To Me"

Give me your Love

Give me your Strength

Give me your Peace

Give me your Faith

I was once a lonely drifter in the world,

And now i'm a powerful knight of the LORD.

Don't ever leave me, don't ever reject me

I may not be perfect, but you'll never forget me

Poem owned by Mike Boyd (Me)

Comments?

sandgrain
Member Elite

since 1999-09-21

Posts 3662
Sycamore, IL, USA

1 posted 2006-02-03 12:01 PM

Welcome! A touching first post. I like the way you pack all that feeling in few words. Looking forward to more of your work.

Rae

jody5
Senior Member

since 2005-12-21

Posts 876
California, U.S.A.

2 posted 2006-02-04 07:37 PM

Mike that is a beautiful poem and a powerful statement. I liked it.

Kim

Michael the 3rd
Junior Member

since 2006-02-02

Posts 10
Oregon, USA

3 posted 2006-02-05 11:13 PM

Thank you both, i've only started writing, yes I write with few words because I myself find it hard to get through a long poem.

Musicmaker1969

Senior Member

since 2000-06-25

Posts 589
Peterborough, Ontario Canada

4 posted 2006-03-23 05:50 PM

I am so sure that He will grant you all that you have asked for in your poem. And yes, you are a knight of the King - the King of all kings. Not even King Arthur and his knights could stand up to Jesus and His Knights. Way to go - great write.

Sheri Adams

Jesus lives in my heart! He can in yours too!!!
Sheri Liegh Adams
[email protected]

Musicmaker1969

Senior Member

since 2000-06-25

Posts 589
Peterborough, Ontario Canada

5 posted 2006-04-23 08:26 AM

I did not realize it but I have read this poem once before and commented but for some reason God has brought me back to it and He does nothing out of coincidence (sp). Yes, you are a Knight of the Lord. We are all His soldiers and all He sees is the perfection because of the blood of the Lamb. A very well thought out poem and a very positive one. Excellent, just as the first time I read it.

Sheri Adams

Jesus lives in my heart! He can in yours too!!!
Sheri Liegh Adams
[email protected]

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